I had to rewrite some of this just now, as I published it.
Autumn Sun shared All are care free Look it is there over the hills Beyond the VALLEYS LIFE is WORTH living unto the fun. Love is DREAMY A FORMAL ALLIANCE between WE And the SUN Fun is not yet DONE. LIFE is SUPREME especially esteemed Have a better VIEW Of the SpiCEy brew SUN is nearly done Night has nearly WON A whistling WIND FLUTTERING distant CHIMES Sun soaked flowers send silent praises The HORIZON rips the SKIES A DELIGHTFUL fright of GLORY The birth of a new Sun Now a SPARKLING CLARITY The sun begins again Warming its EARTH With a BOLD new day At its BOSOM A GRADUAL DRIFTING AWAY AS a SYMPHONY PLAYS an AUTUMN SONG WHAT is a song but a STORY?
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