Another Season

These long days of summer
seemed longer than most, 
and I recount the changes
as the season draws closed.
You turned a year older
and learned how to drive.
You tried some new things;
God knows how you survived.
You learned about friendship
and boundaries were drawn.
You learned about trust
and who you could count on.
I sat back and listened.
I tried not to spy.
I watched as your heart broke
and I tried not to cry.
I witnessed the changes 
as the distance kept growing
until you drifted away
without even knowing.
As your mom I can see things
that you can't understand
because your heart's still a child
though your body, a man.
This summer brought changes;
so many it seems,
but the greatest of all
is between you and me.
I'll fight for my little boy.
I will hold tight your hand
and help you traverse
your path to a man.
It's going to get bumpy;
This road isn't smooth,
but if we're steadfast together,
the reward will be huge.
I don't want to lose you
and I won't let you fail
so one step at a time.
Inhale. Exhale.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/18/2019 10:32:00 AM
Maria, I like this poem. A gifted message for all sons and mothers everywhere. -Richard
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Date: 7/2/2019 9:03:00 PM
Maria, this poem broke my heart, I'm sure that it can straight from yours. Just beautiful! A FAVE for me. I'm going to have my wife read it. She'll be weeping like a willow by the time she's halfway through. You have described our (especially her) raising of our sons. Kudos. ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/2/2019 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much. I did cry desperately whilst writing this. This stage in a boys life is always the hardest for them. He was number 3. I really hope your wife enjoys.
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