Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Another Roll of Two Ply

Messages scribbled on the bathroom stall 
I can't even comprehend it all
The number is fake
And I never met Jake
But that interpretational art has got my attention
I think there's something I forgot to mention
I scribbled my poems in erasable ink
And some one has changed them 
With a marker that's pink
I believe his words right
So my pen says goodnight
Farewell to all
Its always the same in 
The End



***No one will read this crap anyways***

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Lim'Rik Flats January 26, 2017 at 8:59 AM GOTD! Well, at least a big smile, starting with the title;-) Dang I-net is so slow I can't do much trolling for GOTD! candidates:-( Cheerios amigo!

Darren White January 24, 2017 at 12:05 AM I love your message on that wall, and will read that crap any day, any day.

Charlie Smith January 23, 2017 at 10:11 PM Two ply?? I pack my own industrial strength. No chance for a breakthrough...

Daniel Turner January 23, 2017 at 6:53 PM Sounds like they need to open a window. I believe that smell is messing with your vision. I love bathroom humor:):)Soup me and I'll send you a couple:):)

Arthur Vaso January 23, 2017 at 5:06 PM That was me knocking from the stall beside, to pass over some two ply. This is well kind of Vasoy, I can feel the sadness.

Seren Roberts January 23, 2017 at 5:02 PM I did ........lol..Seren

Heidi Sands January 23, 2017 at 2:48 PM Keep that pen going Tim. Your poetry is amazing :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2017 at 2:30 PM - I hope your pen never say goodbye, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 1:31 PM Crap = Creative, Relatable, Amazing Poetry. Kind of sad Tim but your message and thoughts are expressed wonderfully.

Charmaine Chircop January 23, 2017 at 12:32 PM Its not nice if someone plays or changes anybody 's words...Goodbyes? I hope this is not about you Tim.Btw-your poem reminds me of those eighties songs with scribbles on the wall.This is different and I like different.

Jan Allison January 23, 2017 at 11:54 AM Hey I read it and no saying goodbye Tim and its not crap anyway as I have the crown for poop poems ... hmm I've not seen a message on a toilet wall in years lol - :-) hugs Jan xx