"another Place"

I wonder if in heaven is the sky always blue...
Will we dream in colors  or will it be all true...
Can we watch down on family and friends still there..
Or will we just know that they miss us and always care..
Will it be dark at night or will it be a day without sundown..
Is everyone happy and free or do a few still have a frown.. 
Are there any peaks and valleys or is everything layed out straight..
Do we know what direction to go or do we wind up a little late..
Is there a table for dinner where we may say grace...
Or are we never hungry and excist at our own desired pace..
These are questions I have as I float through this life..
To know there is another place we go where all will be right..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 8, 2010 at 8:00 AM
... and so God worked for a whole week to build this beautiful place for us... we don't recognize where we are, I believe, because we haven't treated this Earth, nor do we treat each other, like He intended. We think 'heaven is elsewhere'... one of our greatest misfortunes, in my opinion. Having said that, I still have faith because this IS... god's playground after all. ;) Beautiful writing you do my friend. Thoughtful.
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May 8, 2010 at 3:55 AM
This World is beautiful with all the good and bad,imagine Heaven with only the good part .I do believe we will still be able to watch our loved ones down here.. .We will be happy,great poem indeed. .Charma.
Mehta Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 6:38 PM
May I add?We understand we are of this world and forever unworthy of the heavens we have created?
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May 7, 2010 at 5:12 PM
enjoyed reading today!! inspirational..
Sweetheart Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Great vision u present Michael and much to think about in your lines.. I believe that we will be in a state of constant peace surrounded by our loved one who have preceded us in death... like a reunion. thankxx for sharing your ideas with us ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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May 7, 2010 at 12:34 PM
I really like this, we all wonder about that other place. I hope my loved ones, look down on me, and I told my Grannie, I wanted tea ....well done..
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