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Another Night

bottle,drinking alone and feeling so 
hallow,drowning my pain to wash it 
away yet the memories are stronger 
with every sip that I take.immune to 
the pain only cause I am 
num,seeking comfort in wrong 
places just so I can face 
this,accusitions of being a drunk,yet 
no one will save me I'm **** out of 
luck.there are stories untold in this 
book of my life,nobody knows my 
sorrows or strifes.born like a ghost 
to the ones back at home,shot down 
and striked with words to make me 
feel so alone.broken and beaten by 
the one with my heart,cheated and 
stepped on from the start.life has 
been taken from people so close,to 
young its not fair this lifes just a 
joke.judges by people who don't 
even know me,my body used when 
I'm drunk and lonely,purity taken 
when I couldn't say no,because I'm 
busy drinking away my sorrows.if 
someone would save me maybe I 
wouldn't drink so much,but nobodys 
there when I'm feeling scared,so for 
now ill drink til I pass out and the 
room fades as I start to black 
out.another night with just another 
bottle,drinking alone and feeling so 
hallow,drowning my pain to wash it 
away,why do I have to be this way?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/26/2013 7:57:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Alisha ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:13:00 PM
Hi ALISHA, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/24/2013 3:02:00 AM
Alisha, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making us here at the SOUP a new part of your path. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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