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Another Nail In the Coffin

Ostracized by society we have been relegated
To small corners and alleys, segregated
Not given the same rights and attention
As those that are dementing the nation
We don’t deserve to be victimized
If you don’t believe; look into our eyes
The same we frown, the same we grin
But for a habit we are kin within
We have been blamed for fouling the air
While hoards of steel carriages go by without care
We have been taxed and told that we must pay
For the sins that cost the rest so much, they say
But what of lost days due to hangover, and the marriages trashed 
Or the thousands injured or killed by a drink induced crash
This perverted nation that took prayer from our schools
Steals freedom of choice and allows the godless to rule
Keeps trying to find new places in which it’s nose to poke
None where it belongs and all should anger provoke
So be politically correct and let prejudice die
You all have your vices that no one denies
So leave us to smoke if that’s the choice that we make
If cancer we get, that the chance that we take
We mean no harm to man nor beast
But of all society we are loved the least
All we ask is to be treated with fairness, and spare us
Don’t pass us and pretend our lives have no merit  
Give us our freedom and we will once again be able
To solve the world’s problems out back, at the smokers table

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/25/2018 10:29:00 AM
If I were a smoker, I would probably like and support this "cri de Coeur" more....but, although you have presented a cleverly turned "rap", nicely rhythmical and rather smoothly rhymed, you fail to convince that smokers are being unfairly discriminated against. You are still free to "enjoy" that self-destructive habit, in private and/or in designated locations -- but not to expose others to possibly harmful and unwelcome fumes.
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