Another Mountaintop - Erotica

(Several here have encouraged me to post some of my erotica, so here's a start)

My thoughts fly back to you,
and to the facets of your being,
beauty,  giving,  singing, creating
of safari to adventure, softness
and unique remembering
of images too deep within
to realize as one until my mind
is fused with yours and God's,
exulting in a sweet profanity, 
one hallowed time alone.

Close your eyes, and there for us
incarnate lust--
your naked body lying over me
and thrashing with desire,
our mouths inseparable,
and I,  your ready prey to succulence,
may know the heat of glory
as your thighs press down
upon my own.

And what of arms, attending
to the precious discipline
of nipples, testes, breasts and bellies
in their  quest of paradise?
What of my turgid manhood, 
burgeoning with every thrust
into your seething pelvis
now, again, again !
...and it is not enough.

No amazement at
the restlessness of our desire.
The absolute transcendence
of carnality that we are given
suffices now; our questing tongues,
our probing, hot demand
is ruler of the writhing scene
that would consume us
at the moment that 
I blast within you
all that I may give--

Pure ecstasy is ours,  
for climbing to the heights ,
we find that we have reached 
the summit of Olympus and released
the thunder of the gods.
   ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Well done Dean! Looking forward to reading more : )
Ludden Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Thank you. Interesting that I should be getting so many comments on this so long after it appears.
Guzzi Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Ok excellent..precise tactfull..don't think you need the last 5 lines ..it ends with [all that I may give] Light & love
Ludden Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, doll. Will think on it.
Puddifoot Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 3:05 PM
well written erotica, I need a cold shower now! this captivated me from first line to last, very sensual, you really took me there :-) clever title too, connecting nicely with the last four lines...if you get any negative feedback you can blame me for encouraging you haha
Puddifoot Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 5:27 AM
I don't need any encouragement lol
Ludden Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Thanks. Cold showers help, but warm ones with a showermate are better. I'm always grateful for the encouragement. -Dean
St.Cross Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 5:56 PM
‡ Wow, She Sounds Sooo Beautiful & You, My Dear Gifted Robert * Never To Miss A Beat In Consuming The Flames Of Her Beauty * As I Afore Did Say & Now Find Even More So This Evidence To Be True * 'Your Naked Body Lying Over Me & Thrashing With Desire.' * Wonderful, Not Only Your Amazing Talent But Also, This Steam Made In Pulsations Perfect Poem Amid Both Love & Profound Wanting; Bravo * My Luv, Rachel ‡
Ludden Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Thanks, Rachel. I'll have to confess the woman was only in my mind, but she might have been. The thoughts, though, were sincere enough. :-) Not so amazing. -Dean
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