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Another Love Poem

I drown in your smile

It tastes like golden honey

Your  scent on the wind

Pictures written on a wish

The essence of my life.. gone

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Aneysa Churchwell

June 5, 2010 at 7:16 PM

love the poem you shld read my love poems

Carolyn Devonshire

May 31, 2010 at 3:00 AM

The fleeting quality of "sweet" love is well conveyed, dear LNC. Too bad that essence doesn't last. Don't know how I missed this gem earlier, but I can relate to your thoughts, Barbara. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

May 30, 2010 at 2:22 PM

My congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest, Barbara! This is exquisite..goes to my favs....Peace, love, audrey

Joseph Spence Sr

May 30, 2010 at 12:56 PM

This is so enticing. I just love the flow of the words and the message. You could always catch a falling star. Great job! Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

May 28, 2010 at 3:23 PM

this was so beautiful and well deserved win! andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 28, 2010 at 9:02 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Tanka Me" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

May 28, 2010 at 2:19 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your success with this fine verse...well done...Margaret

May 27, 2010 at 1:33 PM

I like the surprising end. Creative perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen