S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Tanka

Another Love-2

Another Love

You hold me in thrall
Charm me with your demeanor
And draw me to you
Like a kindergarten kid 
Is, by a wayside puddle.

For: Chris Aichtner's 'Enter the Tanka' contest

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 20, 2012 at 6:02 AM Congratulations on your win Jag this is superb just love that last line xx

Poet Destroyer A December 19, 2012 at 8:44 PM Jag :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2012 at 4:08 PM Congratulations on your win, Jag. This was a sweet analogy

Justin Bordner October 17, 2012 at 10:43 PM Never the less quite natural & deft articulation Jag - the puddle metaphor is brilliant - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2012 at 2:21 PM very sweet, Jag. YOu are my last Look-see for the afternoon. thanks for your comment and I hope to see you soon!

Gwendolen Song October 17, 2012 at 12:03 PM Totally fun imaginative write! Who in the world demands such things as a poem--u have to be in the mood to write..it cannot be forced out like water! Anyways, this is stupendous...gwendolen

Wilma Neels October 16, 2012 at 11:24 AM Enjoyed your Tanka tonight Jag! ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2012 at 2:43 AM Lovely small poem jag - well written tanka. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet October 16, 2012 at 2:09 AM Lovely tanka here Jag!Enjoyed.