Another Life

The siren shattered the silence of night
This signalled someone in distress
So out of bed I got and rapidly did dress
I rode down to the shore line
My comrades to meet
The wind was blowing strong
But out at sea a yachtsman 
Was in jeopardy 

Rapidly our boat was launched
Down the ramp to splash into the sea
The engine was roaring ,driving hard
The water picked by the wind into foaming waves
No time to consider the dangers that we faced
As toward the yachtsman forward we raced.
Our search light probing like a finger of light
Tried to pierce the darkness of the night.

Finally we saw the boat 
Its mast broken, hanging limply in the raging sea
We called the yachtsman on the radio to tell of our intent
To fire a rocket, rope attached which he should secure,
We would then tow him from the rocks on the leeward shore
The rocket fired and rope secured we towed the boat, 
To a harbour nearby,  a tragedy averted, another grateful man.
We returned more slowly to where all this began
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 29, 2014 at 11:23 PM
BRIAN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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November 29, 2014 at 6:25 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Brian - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 28, 2014 at 6:29 AM
You have some inspiring images here, and the heroics which you brush over must be fantastic. Great start to your Soup life. Welcome aboard.
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November 27, 2014 at 10:25 AM
Loved the developing story. Keep writing. If you click on a name or avatar, then it will take you to their works. If you then leave a comment... Then they will have a permanent link back to your works.
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November 27, 2014 at 8:49 AM
outstanding piece love the style you drew this brian
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November 25, 2014 at 10:49 PM
welcome to soup, brian... intense story well told!.. huggs
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