Another Kiss

Twas a feeling, much more
Than I dared to own.

She saw it in my eyes
And wished in half-breath signs
To speak but did not.

As I bit my lip and restrained my scream,
Sweat painted our bodies and soaked her mane.

Yet still I desired another kiss
As sweet as honey or peppermint.

Despite those urgent hips that thrust
Against me.
I long for what I have just mentioned.

Those hungry lips I wish to kiss
As sweet as honey or peppermint.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/14/2010 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your work going into the second round..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2010 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Carlus. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:33:00 PM
Carlus, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:58:00 AM
Carlus, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2010 3:12:00 PM
This is nice, Congratz on being featured
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Carlus. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2010 11:43:00 AM
Avery nice and sweet poem Carlus, enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your poem being one of the many poems featured of this week. Have your self a wonderful & safe 4th of july,..p.d.
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Date: 7/4/2010 11:11:00 AM
Congrats on having your lovely poem featured on the Poetry Soup Homepage this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. keep your pen flowing with passion! Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:16:00 PM
congrats on this passionate piece being featured this week, enjoyed it immensely
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:28:00 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:24:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...
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Date: 7/3/2010 3:23:00 AM
Passionate write, enjoyed it.. Congrats on featuring this week as well tc Wilma
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:41:00 PM
This is a good poem thanks for writing and sharing it. Congratulations on being featured. Rhonda Hero
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Carlus. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:13:00 AM
Yes! No one seems to get enough of a good thing. Congrats on this selection. Love,daver
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Date: 6/28/2010 11:01:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/1/2010 4:07:00 PM
Passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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