Daniel Cwiak Poet Concrete

Another Hundred Years?

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       to be
       I      a n o t h e r 
       am                      h u n d r e d  y e a r s
       not                                                     b
       going                   B S G                       e
       to                     U          O                   f
       be                   C                                 o
       here                 G                               r
       that                   O          S                   e
       long.                     C U  B                   w e
       Go                                              a r e 
       Cubs                                         t o
                                                 s e e      
            ?  f l a g   p e n n a n t   a    
       So
       Go
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       Cubs
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       Cubs
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       Cubs
       Go
       Cubs
       Go 
       Cubs

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Gerard Keogh Jr. May 20, 2010 at 12:17 PM It's time. I thought that it would happen with the Pale Hose and the Red Sox, but I still think that fan grabbing ball out there in left field.. You've got to wonder. Maybe ban all goats from the city limits or.. an exorcism. Sadly, I think Lou's days are done. Good job on this! Hey, are they planning anything for the 100 years of the ballpark?? I haven't heard. At the very least, the All Star games should be in Fenway in 2012 and out there in 2016. Regards, Gerard.

Doris Culverhouse May 20, 2010 at 4:22 AM cute one--go braves!!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2010 at 2:57 AM Wishing you the best in Amy's contest should you enter this one Daniel. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Kim Hilliker May 19, 2010 at 6:50 PM Very clever Daniel. Great job.

Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2010 at 5:37 PM well, I am so glad you repeated that last part over and over again so I could realize what you'd written in the circle. I wish I could even do one of these, let alone be able to type them up online!! Good one. Andrea

Poet Destroyer A May 19, 2010 at 1:36 PM okay! you are awesome at this pic. by the way dig you r comment on my dark poet,..as a matter of fact yes I was on something when I wrote that , I was full of life, yeah right LoL ,..i was at work. you know what they say work inspires the mode. the dark mode,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2010 at 12:30 PM What a fun concrete poem, Daniel. But who knows, maybe this will be the Cubs' year. Admire your team spirit! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick May 19, 2010 at 11:03 AM Great design...These are not easy...Good luck in the contest...Keep the design pen flowing.Sara