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Another Good-Bye

Her day bled into a crimson sky of mourning. A moon overcast with laments vision, its reflection echoed in the surface of borrowed time. Now, quietly, the long hours drew nearer to the hush of evenings passing--- sleep bidding another farewell, as the grave gives up its spirit to enter into a different realm--- vicariously on the threshold of dreamscapes view and another good-bye is said. © 2013 Debra Squyres

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Date: 5/15/2013 5:02:00 PM
The bayou beckons with solemn mist. Reflecting what's so dearly missed. A stillness deep with in your soul. Slowly taking life's long toll. Before the next believer kneels. God's grace is there in all that heals. Peace Debra. :)
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Date: 5/14/2013 4:24:00 PM
Wow, Debra, it's been a long time since I have read a poem of yours and this write sure far exceeds your exceptional levels! This piece is tremendous and delightful my friend, I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful write, you have expressed yourself quite nicely! Great work!!
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