Sandra Hudson Poet Nonet

Another Day At Wally World

Wal-Mart has removed its door greeters,
Replacing them with purchase eyes
Grabbing receipts at exits
Waving them like white flags
Yes, they paid! They paid! 
You may pass; thanks!
Do the dance,
Pappy,
lol!

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 23, 2009 at 8:48 AM How true Sandra. Splendid write. What a pain. They don't want us to rip them off like they seem to be ripping us off as of late. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii July 22, 2009 at 3:03 PM ain't it though?! john h loving iii

Heidie Buys July 18, 2009 at 3:36 PM So very well written and I suppose a sign of the times. Nothing more embarrassing than when the sensors at the door goes off because the cashier didn't deactivate the merchandise properly. Well done. Regards Heidie

Sean Kelly July 18, 2009 at 3:10 AM We don't have one , over here Aa , but I get your drift in your perfect Nonet .....

James Marshall Goff July 17, 2009 at 10:13 PM love this nonet! Sandra! and dig readin' your comments on other great poet's work!!! you are one "light-filled soul!" love, jimbo

Matthew Anish July 17, 2009 at 8:35 PM Saw the play "Walmartopia" not long ago. Cavernous shopping centers! Interesting work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire July 17, 2009 at 7:17 PM How true, Alexandra! It always seems humiliating to be asked to show your receipt on the way out of WalMart. We still have door greeters here, but their evil counterparts are waiting in the wings. Great Nonet! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser July 17, 2009 at 5:38 PM Made me chuckle, nice one>>James

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2009 at 5:15 PM Love the humor in this Nonet. It sounds like the Wal-Mart here at Christmas when they really check people at the exits. Sara