Wayland Bunch Poet Villanelle

Another Confession, Inspired By Denise Narayadu's Confessions of a Drug

You invigorated my mind, then followed my heart
I felt the loss of myself  as the dark hours passed
Will this wanting ever end, how could I let it start

You were so clever slowly breaking me part by part
Brief moments of euphoria that never seem to last
You invigorated my mind, then followed my heart

Now I’m a donkey and for a carrot I’ll pull the cart
Slave to a cruel master and forever I will be outcast
Will this wanting ever end, how could I let it start

A wise fool I am, confessing myself I’m so smart
Foolishness displayed by the useless questions I ask
You invigorated my mind, then followed my heart

If you’re confessing your weakness, I’ll cast a dart
You feel the sting, and my words make you aghast
Will this wanting end, how could I let is even start

You want reality  to be one glorious work of art
Out of that, only shame and regret have amassed
You invigorated my mind, then followed my heart
Will this wanting ever end, how could I let it start 


As stated this was inspired by Denise Narayadu's poem. Denise is a wonderful poet who's work I recently discovered, she's gaining momentum quickly.

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Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu December 14, 2013 at 2:33 PM You are awesome too...love ur kind of style. Alwaz, Based On Belief Wayland Bunch December 14, 2013 at 2:50 PM Thanks for your visit and your comment.

Denise Retro December 14, 2013 at 7:36 AM WOW... a place i come to read your poetry and find a complement for myself, it means alot coming from you, thank you Wayland... i enjoyed your version of that title, it is always a pleasure reading your poetry. Wayland Bunch December 14, 2013 at 11:17 AM Your poetry I'd very powerful, like I said this really only emphasises a few lines from your poem. I could probably write ten villanelles over it, but I won't attempt it lol. Thanks for your comment and always for reading.

Richard Lamoureux December 14, 2013 at 7:35 AM You are very good at this form. You may wish to consider changing past to passed, it still rhymes but makes more sense in the context of how you have written the line. Wayland Bunch December 14, 2013 at 11:14 AM Good eye and you're very correct it still rhymes anyway, thanks for the correction and for the comment.