Another Blue Sky---Sf

~A distant island still undiscovered, nearing magnetically to its mystery, distancing me from myself every moment, remembering to forget the return path, even my earth is puzzled,...revolve or rotate? another blue sky beyond this one is calling.~ ================000================
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 11:03 PM
So THIS is what you were talking about!! Soupmail and a BIG CONGRATS on the book.
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Way to go..Congrats..Sara
A   Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Kash, , Awesome free verse win.. xox~ Linda,
Sirak Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:20 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 12:06 AM
kashi bud, did i miss this?... such a melodious, mellow verse deserving of a stunning slot... warm congrats..yes!..:) huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 8:09 PM
Way to go Kash. There is a lot to think of here. Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 6:27 PM
KAsh, even after all the things I said about loving this poem a few years ago, I still did not remember you wrote it. It is still very nice to see this one. Congrats for your win.
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 1:35 AM
oh my gosh, I never would have caught that if you had not told me since you called it free verse, Kash. Well, isn't that cool that I had this strange desire to fave it!!! I'm so glad I did that now. Thank you!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 8:00 PM
gosh, this seems so deep, Kash. ANother one showing your artist soul. It's mystical. Think I'll fave it! (Joe is gonna be home a lot now that he has lost another job, so it looks like my souping will be somewhat curtailed.) Sure hope I find some time late tonight to catch up. Off I go again! Just came on to post something. Luv, Andrea
Wesley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Serene and uplifting Kashi, makes me stop and dream awhile.
Wilson Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 3:42 AM
very hopeful and uplifting! love,Deb
Song Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:09 AM
Mysterious places are the best to write about, Kash. You have become the tour guide for the mental get-a-way. Very inviting....even what lies beyond! How lovely your blog! Gwendolen
Devonshire Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Deep and moving, Kash. We are always discovering new places, sometimes forgetting how to return to the past. I love the way you end this with a spiritually uplifting last line! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..A very good one indeed..I am glad that I chose this one to review this afternoon..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 12:07 PM
wow Kash this is stunning..luv that nearing magnetically to its mystery line.. awesome piece..happy weekend..luv..
Zzzzz Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 5:49 AM
A lovely dreamy kind of poem. We all have some beautiful place under a blue sky that we can go, whether it be in our head or in reality. A good, inventive write.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace