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Another autumn haiku

Indian summer, out of depression's shadow- Autumn leaves my heart For Challenge 8 lines max contest 9th October

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Date: 12/6/2012 7:16:00 PM
love this one the most... thank you for allowing me to read and study your ku... always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Russell's "Challenge" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 3:35:00 PM
Very clever haiku, Brian. Thanks - your contest was great fun
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Date: 10/12/2011 4:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win Brian.Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/12/2011 1:10:00 AM
Very neat, I love the last line, how appropriate. Congrats on your win. By the way, I never did get an answer back from you on my question on your blog months ago, about what makes a good "free verse". I loved to know your thoughts. lee
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Brian. Excellent. Nice going. All the best. Ralph
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:29:00 PM
Congrats Brian on another awesome win with this lovely image filled piece and entry for the contest.. breathtaking and refreshing too..luv..
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Date: 10/9/2011 2:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2011 12:43:00 PM
ah, that is so nice, very sweet. Enjoyed it, it just gives such emotion which the haiku, usually does not affect that way. Excellent expression and skill. Lucinda/ Journey
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