Another Autumn Haiku

Indian summer, out of depression's shadow- Autumn leaves my heart For Challenge 8 lines max contest 9th October

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2012 7:16:00 PM

love this one the most... thank you for allowing me to read and study your ku... always~ LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/14/2011 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry placing in Russell's "Challenge" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 10/13/2011 3:35:00 PM

Very clever haiku, Brian. Thanks - your contest was great fun

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2011 4:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win Brian.Enjoyed.

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/12/2011 1:10:00 AM

Very neat, I love the last line, how appropriate. Congrats on your win. By the way, I never did get an answer back from you on my question on your blog months ago, about what makes a good "free verse". I loved to know your thoughts. lee

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/11/2011 11:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Brian. Excellent. Nice going. All the best. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/11/2011 9:29:00 PM

Congrats Brian on another awesome win with this lovely image filled piece and entry for the contest.. breathtaking and refreshing too..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2011 2:43:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Journey Mcknight

Date: 10/9/2011 12:43:00 PM

ah, that is so nice, very sweet. Enjoyed it, it just gives such emotion which the haiku, usually does not affect that way. Excellent expression and skill. Lucinda/ Journey