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I've heard about the arrival of fanciful fushia strangers but I've no fear of them and not worried about dangers. They seem a bit nonsensical; funny the way they speak To me, everything they say comes out sounding like Greek! Maybe on their planet, peaches have three turquoise eyes Could they be humans, just wearing an alien disguise? I've never heard the haloed moon referred to as mother Mary, nor of opulent opal oceans and a three humped dromedary. I call them fluff nuggets; an accurate description, I think Their gibberish makes me shake with laughter, quick as a wink Life forms like these AI are manipulated by puppet strings They're infringing upon planet Earth, inhabited by Earthlings. *These are my thoughts and words, but if you take umbrage with any of the lines, I'll throw Jan under the bus, cuz she started it.

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Date: 9/19/2023 11:00:00 AM
Well done. On point... Keep writing like time is in an hourglass, and we must be on our toes, more than ever before. God bless your life. Ann
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Date: 9/19/2023 11:02:00 AM
You’ve left some really kind comments, Ann. I appreciate you for them. Thanks.
Date: 9/19/2023 2:05:00 AM
Enjoyed this, Lin:)
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Date: 9/19/2023 7:39:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Jo.
Date: 9/18/2023 11:18:00 AM
Don't blame AI, it is going to fool us.
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Date: 9/18/2023 11:26:00 AM
I'm fairly confident we've already been fooled by them. Thanks, Jay.
Date: 9/18/2023 7:27:00 AM
AI fluff nuggets lolol. Made me laugh Lin. Thanks...
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Date: 9/18/2023 11:25:00 AM
I gotta say they made me laugh, too. lol thanks, Jeff.
Date: 9/18/2023 6:15:00 AM
This is an imaginative and delightful poem, and I absolutely adore those fluffy little nuggets of joy! Your humor and creativity never fail to bring a smile.
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Date: 9/18/2023 6:20:00 AM
If they made you smile, Lasaad they were worth being brought to life in a poem. Thanks ever so much for letting me know how much you like the little ones.
Date: 9/17/2023 11:50:00 PM
Such a fun read Lin and well written,’nor of opulent opal oceans and a three humped dromedary’. The last line is thought provoking. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Have a great week. :)
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Date: 9/18/2023 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much for enjoying my humor, Christina. I hope your week is a good one for you, as well.
Date: 9/17/2023 1:25:00 PM
Lin, so funny, love your humor and creativity and all those fluff nugget flowery words floating around the soup, ha ha!
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Date: 9/17/2023 2:11:00 PM
It’s almost like reading rainbow but those stories made mire sense. ! Thanks
Date: 9/17/2023 12:43:00 PM
This is a creative one, and love those fluff nuggets! I hope we can win one at a country fair game.
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:48:00 PM
Ha David. I’ll have to create one and apply for a license to sell. Thanks for loving my little aliens.
Date: 9/17/2023 11:47:00 AM
ha ha ha Lin you crease me up woman and blaming me for your inspiration - pah, i protest in the strongest possible terms and there is NO mention of poop!. I think fluff nuggets sound like something you would buy in Ann summers lol lol. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2023 11:55:00 AM
Sex toys? Haha. That’s almost as funny as picturing them as something to eat. Think I’ll stop there and not risk being naughty. Thanks for the inspiration!

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