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Announcing Mogo

I’m very pleased to introduce to you something once a toy made completely new. All you need are two good legs and balance! But it’s not a bike. It’s as healthy as biking, so cyclists, take a hike! It’s much more fun for everyone to JUMP their way to where they want to get to every day. The bottom part of it, once made of rubber, used to wear down fast and made a few kids blubber. For when the steel part poked itself on through, annoying clatter hitting pavement would ensue. That old-fashioned part that gave bounce for you is completely remodeled. Now metal won’t poke through! And better yet, it’s not rubber-made at all! You now can jump to anywhere on anything, and you won’t fall. This awesome patented invention will never get stuck in dirt, grass or gravel, nor in mud and muck. With longer and higher jumps than you ever had before, the distance you can jump has increased twenty times more. No one else but us has this technology. Come and take a test-jump. You will see. . . why we call our product the Quick MOGO stick. POGO redesigned, will make you jump for joy, and that is no schtick! March 16, 2018 for "Advertisement: Sell something, make us want it" contest of Lewis Raynes

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Date: 4/10/2018 5:31:00 PM
"POGO redesigned" - I want one. Enticing poem, Andrea.
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Date: 3/18/2018 5:59:00 PM
Ok i'll have one. good luck in contest. Andrea, love it.
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Date: 3/18/2018 2:14:00 AM
Send one over now, Andrea, we have snow here again! Fun write, I'll pre-order. Viv x
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Date: 3/17/2018 10:16:00 PM
You made this sound so much fun! Now everyone is going to look for it... Lol! Such creativity from a talented poetess! Totally sold... hugs :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 5:26:00 PM
I didn't see what was coming, but I can absolutely hear the spiel. Really clever and funny. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/17/2018 6:39:00 AM
You sold it well, Andrea. Great advertisement..best for a win!
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Date: 3/17/2018 6:28:00 AM
Great creative thinking Andrea, and you converted that thought into a great poem..
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Date: 3/17/2018 12:27:00 AM
I had guessed trampoline when first you asked me to guess. You are a compelling and lively salesperson! I could never get my initial balance to get started on a pogo stick, but I'd probably buy one because your pitch is so charming. I enjoyed this. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 3/16/2018 11:31:00 PM
love it :) very nicely done, fantastic flow and rhyme, and a buyer you've found.
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Date: 3/16/2018 10:08:00 PM
Sold. Love it Andrea! xomo
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Date: 3/16/2018 9:49:00 PM
I would like to put in an order for ten Andrea lol. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 3/16/2018 8:08:00 PM
I love this Mogo Andrea..Very nicely done..
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Date: 3/16/2018 6:59:00 PM
what a fun poem Andrea and the final couplet made me smile as I had a a pogo stick as a young child and it was one of my fave toys ever - now if you could invent a MOJO stick I would buy that lol:-) hugs jan xx
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