Anniversary Bubbles

Put on a new dress, was looking really hot, Dyed my hair with several blonde highlights, Applied my MAC makeup... ooh-la-la, I’m singing Al Greene, “So In Love With You” Its our wedding anniversary, 29th and you knew Bubbles overflow from the champagne bottle You beckon me to come hither into our room Which shoes to wear... oh you burst my bubble! Written by Lee Ramage September 8, 2011 Sponsor Debbie Guzzi Contest “Bubbles”

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Date: 9/9/2011 9:45:00 PM
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/9/2011 9:51:00 PM
didn't get it...yet, have you sent? Lee
Date: 9/9/2011 6:01:00 PM
ha ha. funny ending! a great story/entry for the contest Lee. good luck :)
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Date: 9/8/2011 9:56:00 PM
oh that's right,you are going on 30 years marriage. I remember you telling me that!YOUR poem sounds like a good bubble burst; whereas mine was quite the opposite! Sounds like a great anniversary. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:45:00 AM
thnx or the comments..an interesting take on the subject..
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:38:00 AM
Enjoyed this one..It was captiviting..Good luck in Debbie's contest..Reads like winning material to me..Is it really 29th anniversary?Thanks for the kind review of my work..I did not know that people who were not premium could not click on about this poem..I am sorry that you can not see my pictures and notes...Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2011 8:38:00 AM
Lee, It is not my pictures but off the internet for my pictures won't come through..Sara
Date: 9/8/2011 7:54:00 AM
Great play on words, Lee! You planned this poem right around a killer line-u burst my bubble......I should take lessons from u!!!! Wonderful entry. I was tossin round some ideas last nite for this contest--my imagination went in a totally different direction. Have a great day, Gwendolen
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