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Anniversary

A Contemporary Haiku

giggles from the covers
champaign chilling
walkers beside the bed

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Linda Alice Fowler

March 31, 2024 at 7:36 AM

Cute one Jerry. Quite the image! :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 26, 2024 at 9:22 AM

So cute…cuteness in an old couple

Jerry Brotherton

March 26, 2024 at 5:51 PM

You know what they say, age is a state of mind. Until you pull a muscle.

Tania Kitchin

March 26, 2024 at 3:42 AM

Jerry, a great haiku, so true to life.

Jerry Brotherton

March 26, 2024 at 5:49 PM

Thanks Tania. I appreciate your kindness. Have a blessed day, my friend.

Gershon Wolf

March 25, 2024 at 6:27 PM

Oh, what an image. I don't whether to laugh or cry first. Bottoms up!

Jerry Brotherton

March 26, 2024 at 5:49 PM

Hey, I tip my hat to them. Hope they don't break a hip.

Bill Baker

March 25, 2024 at 5:46 PM

Made me smile, Jerry. A real-life poem, my friend. I like it, especially, "walkers beside the bed". Have a great day! Bill

Jerry Brotherton

March 26, 2024 at 5:47 PM

I debated if I should say canes resting against the bed, I was afraid someone would think walkers was a zombie joke.

Yann Rolland

March 25, 2024 at 4:32 PM

enjoyed this privileged and rare moment, thanks poet

Jerry Brotherton

March 26, 2024 at 5:46 PM

Thanks, Yann. Glad you stopped by.

Silent One

March 25, 2024 at 12:54 PM

You summed it up really well..

Jerry Brotherton

March 26, 2024 at 5:45 PM

Thanks, Silent One. I appreciate your comment. Have a wonderful day, my friend.

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