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A Contemporary Haiku giggles from the covers champaign chilling walkers beside the bed

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Date: 3/31/2024 7:36:00 AM

Cute one Jerry. Quite the image! :)

Date: 3/26/2024 9:22:00 AM

So cute…cuteness in an old couple

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 5:51:00 PM

You know what they say, age is a state of mind. Until you pull a muscle.

Date: 3/26/2024 5:45:00 AM

this one made me chuckle...walkers by the bed was priceless. Well done, Jerry. Have a splendid day, Sara

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 5:50:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. I hope all your days are filled with sunshine.

Date: 3/26/2024 3:42:00 AM

Jerry, a great haiku, so true to life.

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 5:49:00 PM

Thanks Tania. I appreciate your kindness. Have a blessed day, my friend.

Date: 3/25/2024 6:27:00 PM

Oh, what an image. I don't whether to laugh or cry first. Bottoms up!

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 5:49:00 PM

Hey, I tip my hat to them. Hope they don't break a hip.

Date: 3/25/2024 5:46:00 PM

Made me smile, Jerry. A real-life poem, my friend. I like it, especially, "walkers beside the bed". Have a great day! Bill

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 5:47:00 PM

I debated if I should say canes resting against the bed, I was afraid someone would think walkers was a zombie joke.

Date: 3/25/2024 4:32:00 PM

enjoyed this privileged and rare moment, thanks poet

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 5:46:00 PM

Thanks, Yann. Glad you stopped by.

Date: 3/25/2024 12:54:00 PM

You summed it up really well..

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 5:45:00 PM

Thanks, Silent One. I appreciate your comment. Have a wonderful day, my friend.