Sunlite Wanter Poet Rhyme

Annie's Sun

Annie’s Sun

Today is yesterday’s tomorrow,
Oh, Annie, if your song would say,
Sun follows and follows and follows,
Ah, but it is only a song today,

This poem took its form in that yesterday,
Different was this day to be, and yet,
One foot barely follows another, 
I long for your happy hair of red.

Yesterday’s hope proved futile,
Though today’s hope will banish sorrow,
And one day Sandy will Arf,
And hope will win joy - tomorrow.

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Gershon Wolf May 16, 2019 at 12:01 PM So cute, clever, and yes, magical. Nicely done, Sunlite! :) gw

Pat Adams May 6, 2019 at 8:10 AM I was intrigued with this one. Sandy will arf? Sandy is a dog? Not exactly my cup of tea. (Little orphan Annie, I mean), but using the words to make up the original poem was very clever and creative! Well done my friend!....pat

Jennifer Proxenos May 4, 2019 at 12:53 AM You use the words from the song 'Little Orphan Annie' to create a meaningful awesome poem, a deep write which is such an immense pleasure to read! Well penned SW - keep on using your magic to pen your beautiful poems. Hugs, Jennifer

Aqua Marine May 1, 2019 at 3:22 PM Delightful write! Red haired Annie and her dog ,Sandy? One day follows another, we always hope for something better..."And hope will win joy -tomorrow. Deep feeling in your poem..(((HUGS)))

Demetrios Trifiatis May 1, 2019 at 12:47 PM Delightful witty poem dearest, Sunlite! A pleasure to read!

Mike Hauser May 1, 2019 at 11:39 AM Really love this one! Sunlite Wanter May 1, 2019 at 6:20 PM I'm glad, Mike. Thank you.