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Annie's Sun

Annie’s Sun Today is yesterday’s tomorrow, Oh, Annie, if your song would say, Sun follows and follows and follows, Ah, but it is only a song today, This poem took its form in that yesterday, Different was this day to be, and yet, One foot barely follows another, I long for your happy hair of red. Yesterday’s hope proved futile, Though today’s hope will banish sorrow, And one day Sandy will Arf, And hope will win joy - tomorrow.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 12:01:00 PM

So cute, clever, and yes, magical. Nicely done, Sunlite! :) gw

Pat Adams

Date: 5/6/2019 8:10:00 AM

I was intrigued with this one. Sandy will arf? Sandy is a dog? Not exactly my cup of tea. (Little orphan Annie, I mean), but using the words to make up the original poem was very clever and creative! Well done my friend!....pat

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/4/2019 12:53:00 AM

You use the words from the song 'Little Orphan Annie' to create a meaningful awesome poem, a deep write which is such an immense pleasure to read! Well penned SW - keep on using your magic to pen your beautiful poems. Hugs, Jennifer

Aqua Marine

Date: 5/1/2019 3:22:00 PM

Delightful write! Red haired Annie and her dog ,Sandy? One day follows another, we always hope for something better..."And hope will win joy -tomorrow. Deep feeling in your poem..(((HUGS)))

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/1/2019 12:47:00 PM

Delightful witty poem dearest, Sunlite! A pleasure to read!

Mike Hauser

Date: 5/1/2019 11:39:00 AM

Really love this one!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/1/2019 6:20:00 PM

I'm glad, Mike. Thank you.