Notes About The Poem

Slushy doesn't come naturally to me

I certainty think twice about going public with it.

But it's Annie's birthday on the 20th July...

it's been a bitch of a year, but she's still here.

I used AI (kill me now) to set this to music for her...

The results were astounding and frightening in

equal measure.

 

Update...

Finally got the mp3 malarkey to function, so mp3 attached.

No, that's not me singing.... it's, effectively, a robot!

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Annie’s Song

Can I find the words to say, just what you mean to me today
And what you’ve meant to me, throughout these forty years gone by
We first met at that meet n greet, a low brick wall became our seat
And then you seemed to find me sweet and my heart skipped a beat

We lived so many miles apart; each inch a mile in my heart
But I’d have walked or stole a horse and cart
And letters, phone calls, weekend drives, sealed a bond in our two lives
A hundred miles would not keep us apart

I’m no Keats, I’m no Shelly; I’m no poet off the tele
So let me say a few words in a quite straightforward way
I love you
okay
And I love you more with every passing day

For we were always meant to be, it’s in the stars, our destiny
It’s me for you and you for me… eternally
I know this is true…
My heart beats just for you

And so today, my birthday girl, who still has my heart in a whirl
Without you my whole life would soon unfurl
I love you, you see… Anne, I hope that you can see 
That there’s no way you can rid yourself of me

I’m no Keats, I’m no Shelly; I’m no poet off the tele
So let me say a few words in a quite straightforward way
I love you
okay
And I love you more with every passing day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 9:34 PM
What an amazing song this is. Annie's song was John Denver, right? You can do an Annie's song too!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 5:25 PM
what beautifully written words and feelings. Your gratitude and love for your wife is heartwarming. She's lucky to have you and your words. Romantic poem. Hope her bday was grand.
M  Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 3:01 AM
Oh Terry your Annie is so loved by you and deservedly so as she sounds just lovely. I know it has been a hard time for you both of late….l hope things are heading in more positive direction now. I hope she had a great b’day ( her birthday is two days after mine) l would love to meet you and Annie it would be great fun l do believe! Beautiful poem! Debx
Flood Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 5:03 PM
Don’t you just hate it when you type a long reply and Soup says it’s too long. My usual hack wouldn’t work, so, regrets, I’ll just say thanks so much, Deb. Annie was well chuffed. Your birthday is the same day as my sister’s. Me 6 July, Sister and you 18 July, Annie 20 July… so we’re all crabs then
Edmonds  Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 10:35 AM
That’s beautiful Terry, your wife is sure to love and treasure these loving words… Beryl
Flood Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Thankyou, Beryl… she was nigh on struck dumb… I think that was a good sign ;-)
Cunningham Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 11:00 PM
A beautiful tribute Terry, she's one lucky girl to have a you as an amazing husband. Hope she has a lovely birthday. Tom
Flood Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 1:46 PM
Thanks, Tom. Her first ever love song and her first ever ‘birthday girl’ balloon… I scored a double top today… she was chuffed as nuts ;-)
Wolf Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 9:14 PM
Your love shines through every stanza, Terry. May the love increase. ~ Gershon
Flood Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 1:49 PM
Thanks, GW. Annie’s been through the mill this year, so it’s nice to find I can still surprise her. ;-)
Baker Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Straight forward and quite romantic Terry. I liked it. Bill
Flood Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 1:55 PM
Thanks, Bill. Funny how the poem looks a bit ‘jagged’ but the music that the robots made with it flowed surprisingly well. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Lane Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 5:48 PM
No greater gift could you offer her. You already gave her your heart. ;-)
Flood Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Thanks, Lin. Annie was struck dumb for a few seconds, but she was well chuffed.
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