Annie Stays Put

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Just passing on a message...

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Her nickname perhaps should be ‘Whizzy’
She rushes round making me dizzy
Right now, she’s unwell
But asked me to tell 
That grim reaper guy that she’s busy

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/4/2025 7:40:00 PM

Well If he comes knocking, don't answer the door lol Hope she's feeling better Terry.. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2025 11:17:00 AM

What a creative Limerick write/story you have here. Love It... That is telling the grim reaper guy off. Yes, stay far away. Have a fun day/weekend writing away...............

Lin Lane

Date: 4/3/2025 4:43:00 PM

That’s telling him, Annie!

Terry Flood
Date: 4/4/2025 9:25:00 AM

Just a line that she came out with, when she looked like he just might be hovering. Morbid, yes… but I had to admire her spirit.