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I feigned to not see Duke Caboom
        as rode, he did, across my room
            and filled my gut with instant doom
    his motorcycle - silent!
my fear so waxing violent

        and there she was - far from her lamp
            Bo Peep, with sheep, that kidless tramp
    her creeping movements caused a cramp
a ghoulish undertaking
        my Disney PJ’s shaking

            behind was Forky, shad’wing Bo
    inhuman movements, odd and slow
and ‘Bonnie’ written neath his toes
        his gait was strange and swerving
            the sight was quite unnerving

    then nightlight glow confirmed my fear
the gliding shape of Buzz Lightyear
        his tight flight suit worn ear-to-ear
            with gruesome grin askance
    I nearly messed my pants

        but …

what was it finally brought my fall?
        one voice-assisted Woody doll
            thus nearing with his creepy crawl
    my mouth a-tasting tannic
I’d reached a full-on panic …

        the toys were moving, manic
            those toys … were … MOVING!!




~ this is a very musical form I created called “cinqopet” (pronounced sing-ko-pay) and I’ve written quite a few now as it’s a fun form to write in and an enjoyable form to read - I hope you like it ~

Copyright © 2025 Gregory Richard Barden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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