Animating Innate Vibrance

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10/25/2024 for Animating innate vibrance Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

Didn't Albert Einstein say that space is also time? that matter is also energy, just another synergy, and the universe is ours in the space between two stars? Does everything repeat in the space between two beats? and do my heartbeats frame all spacetime by any name? Can open minds and open eyes, and open hearts see peace arise? If I miss you 'tween two beats, will I see you when it repeats?

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/26/2024 7:17:00 PM

I like this science sponsored poem. There is deep philosophy which I will try to figure out. The heavens sound exciting but I'm partial to Earth.

David Crandall
Date: 10/27/2024 8:42:00 AM

I agree with you. Earth is really the only planet for a human -just right, maybe for the human body. The mind gets to go anywhere. Deep philosophy is not my forte, so I wouldn't spend too much time - lol - but if you do figure it out, let me know what it means!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/25/2024 11:29:00 PM

Dear david, what an evocative and touching poem this is got me thinking so deep especially that last line is soul stirring really “If I miss you 'tween two beats, will I see you when it repeats?” Gosh! Love that! Pleasure reading another heartfelt poem from you! Sending you light always

David Crandall
Date: 10/26/2024 3:36:00 PM

Thanks Ink. I'm happy that you enjoyed this one! Thanks for the light and sending light in return.