Angry For Gaza

Yesterday in GAZA I saw a mother's tears About his family martyrs You don't know how I felt I thought I'll kill myself I used to ask her (myself) How can I go there ? How can I help them ? Why am not I brave ? Especially this time Why am I so late ? Why do I stay behind ? My wall's shade I wanted to fight, didn't I ? Why am I scared from the fake ? Sons of Zion, the wrongdoers by their crimes This is a big mistake How can I go ? In order to show To all this world How I shall swallow This Israel, like the pea Mix it with the peach I'm not joking here It's just I wanna volunteer By everything I've, even it's my ears

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Black Matta

Date: 9/2/2014 7:10:00 AM

Hi Mohammed, I feel happy when I read a poem about Gaza from non Palestinians. Your poem is simple, but I can feel how angry you were at that time, I can feel how you wanted to do something for Palestine,Gaza.Thank you/Blackmatta:)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/28/2014 6:32:00 PM

Hi Mohammed, what a deep powerful write this is! Well done. I wish you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings. Pandita

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 7:57:00 PM

Mohammed,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2014 11:27:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mohammed - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2014 4:32:00 PM

Mohammed, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@