ANGER

It is wise to direct your anger towards problems - not people; to focus your energies on answers - not excuses.

(William Arthur Ward)


If kept bottled up, a poison taken like vitamins,
this elixir will eat you from the inside. Ears
pierced not with pretty jewels, but allowed to be
stabbed over and over again with curses. Blessings
should have been returned, kisses for the enemy,
not for lips but for grace. Bitterness hardens
the arteries, the heart becomes a surgeon’s slab.
Anger
entered with close encounters, with flying spit
not holy water, with not the shadow of the King
but of a spouse, leaning in not for a hug, but
for elocution and effect sans affection. Forgetfulness
of passion as if you were an annoying passerby.
Still
you hold your breath after all the tears have puddled
around the bathroom concrete, almost losing
your sanity…repeat…repeat, and grace.
Enough
love left, your mind nearly slipped into the abyss,
but you pointed a dagger finger at the enemy,
the devil, and shouted adamantly, “No! No! No!”
and God
turned it all around, your anger buried underground,
your love melted your husband’s heart. Reverberations
of a sound mind go out…go out to all. Applause
of angel armies, the good guys, the surprise
of grace.
Kiss…kiss…erase the bad times. Good times roll.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/29/2024 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2024 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Tonye
Date: 3/28/2024 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Anger" is a powerful write. Love your ending... Have a blessed day.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/28/2024 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 3/23/2024 8:43:00 PM
Oh I love this ! What beautiful thoughts flow from your heart. Anger if bottled up can become so toxic like poison. But if we take time to allow the anger to settle down and bury the anger underground, it can create phenomenal effect and your enemy may turn into a blessing friend. All what is needed is God's grace. A beautiful poem dear Kim. It goes into my FAVE.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2024 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, dear Valsa! Keep bitterness at bay.
Date: 3/21/2024 2:10:00 AM
an upsetting poem, la vie n'est pas un fleuve tranquille, best wihes dear poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2024 8:02:00 AM
Mercy beaucoup, mon amie!
Date: 3/20/2024 5:05:00 PM
I can relate to this- you, being, the bit wiser than me, I sometimes feel the 'passions left like a passby"- I wonder how in the world we betray one another, over what? I enjoyed reading this, and wish you the best :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2024 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 3/20/2024 12:26:00 PM
i am fortunate to rarely feel this emotion. But I see it in many individuals and it greatly aggravates me because I just can't understand people behaving this way. Apathy in marriage is more understandable to me, but a spouse with anger issues is doomed to fail . Good one, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2024 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 3/20/2024 10:06:00 AM
Anger is man's downfall. We must resist and try to find solutions. Your honesty is profound and worthy to read. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2024 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Solutions abound with prayer. God bless you!
Date: 3/20/2024 7:14:00 AM
Dear Kim, Your poem reflects such wonderful raw honesty on this emotional journey. It powerfully conveys the destructive nature of harboring anger and the importance of channeling it towards solutions rather than letting it consume us. I loved how your words create the internal struggle, the wounds inflicted, and the triumph of love and grace. Kim a wonderful reflection on forgiveness and redemption. - Blessings, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2024 11:40:00 AM
We should never stay where we are but move toward grace in prayer. Blessings. (For some the hurt is too great and abusive - different story altogethet)
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