Anger(My First Try At a Slam)

Anger in your eyes Hate in your words Yet these words fly by My unsupecting ears You yearn to hear Me cry and see tears Yet I won't let my fears Show through my character And countless times after You would aplogize and come back All the while I had my things packed Baby I'm leaving never to return Because I count this a lesson learned I can no longer hide These feelings inside And let you abuse my love So I'll fly like a dove Away from your presence And give you the sheer essence That you were not needed So before you proceeded To give me an earful I was already out the door And away from your anger at the world And from your pure deceit **My first try at a Slam.I don't know what I'm doing,so please comment and give some advice.**