Angel's Wish

On my travels I noticed,
Your beauty captivated me,
Moving to distraction,
If only! I thought!
Could two worlds ever meet?
I cried!
Feel like I’m falling mid-air,
Flying without wings,
I’m just the angel,
Feeling incomplete,
Time ticking,
Skipping beats,
Earth standing still,
You’re special!
I’m the stranger,
How could I belong,
From so far away, 
And yet so near,
You’re the perfect soul,
The beauty in this place,
I’m the messenger, 
Angel’s wings,
Stranger looking in,
Until my heart split,
Tearing me apart
How can this be,
My heart wants to kiss
If only you could see,
How much my heart bleeds,
Wanting the impossible
Wanting to be free,
Love shouting out,
Breaking through,
Saying! I’m here,
Touching earth,
Can earth see?

13/11/2016
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Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Many congrats on your top-notch entry and win, Wendy. Lainey
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December 2, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Thank you Elaine x
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December 1, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the"Creep" contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Rycroft Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thanks Alexis xx very kind of you x
Ball Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Beautifully written with such emotion. Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest my friend. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB
Rycroft Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:20 AM
Thank you judy xxx
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November 14, 2016 at 2:46 PM
- A rose in full bloom ... beautiful poem Wendy, good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 14, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Sunshine xxx
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November 13, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Great job Mrs Wendy. A wonderful response to Creep. Good luck:)
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November 13, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Thank you, Daniel xxx
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