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Stare all over, O World, you scarcely utter. Bear stalwart angels to arise over the air tugger. Odoriferous water may abscond the realm of prosily. Such as the Goddess of Heaven perpetrates an odyssey, Please, Lord, I pray you are aware of my plea heed. The blunder I committed thwarts a significant need. My wickedness is crucial to fade as it's such a bigwig. I aspire that everyone will stay ready for the callow sprig. My trudge to the palatial gateway has formally begun. I'm embedded in the exacerbated curse greaten. We embody no faith in eliciting heavenly mercy. And will do it as soon as I can from a gallows tree. My mighty task was a cipher accredited to splendor. Plus, the angels yielded me their smoldering ember. They allotted me munificently for their rare care, too. Failed my mystical prowess to beckon them, they mellow. Below kaleidoscopic bulwarks or in a raving creek, In bosom nirvana, we withdrew the draughty bleak. I earned a lasting bliss than one could dream. And I willingly sieve to share my peaceful stream.
Written: December 15, 2021 A STRAND (DEC 26) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 12/17/2021 10:13:00 AM
An absolutely wondrous gem is this exceptional creation! A definite fav... Merry Christmas To You And Yours, my friend. God bless..
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Date: 12/17/2021 2:44:00 AM
I like how I found embedded in this verse the idea we might seek forgiveness at the very last moment....Quote: We embody no faith in eliciting heavenly mercy. And will do it as soon as I can from a gallows tree. Nicely done...Delice
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Date: 12/16/2021 10:04:00 AM
We should all pray to our guardian angel to help us reach heavenly bliss.
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Date: 12/16/2021 7:17:00 AM
A humbly written line acknowledging to help we get even in our misgiving, Lasaad. "Plus, the angels yielded me their smoldering ember. They allotted me munificently for their rare care, too". Then a confermation of one's destiny, "I earned a lasting bliss than one could dream. And I willingly sieve to share my peaceful stream". A powerful finish. Very introspective poem. I enjoyed the reading. Your poet friend, Bill
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Date: 12/16/2021 4:43:00 AM
A prayer of longing resonates in your words, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/16/2021 4:30:00 AM
An inspiring and uplifting poem that helps one ascent to heaven, dearest friend, Lasaad! Blessings!
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Date: 12/15/2021 8:03:00 PM
Yes, yearn for the lasting bliss and not for the trifles of this world ! Beautifully composed Lasaad !
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