Fred Cleaveland Poet Rhyme

Angel's Lover

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                                      The lover sleeps and amid his dreams 
                                  His angel comes on sunlit beams. 
                                To waken him with kisses sweet, 
                              For her love for him is oh so deep. 
                     She wakes him with her caresses light 
                      Upon his skin and smiles so bright. 
                     And in her eyes, he sees the love 
                   She feels for him neath stars above. 
                   He comes to her to gently place, 
                Kisses upon her neck and face. 
             To caress her body and touch her soul. 
            For together two become a whole. 
            The love they make is deep and true 
            And in this embrace their love renew. 
           When all is done and all's been said, 
           Upon her breasts he rests his head. 
           And hears her heart beat for him alone. 
           A greater love, he's never known.

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 16, 2010 at 5:43 AM Congratulations on your win in Mac's Contest Fred. Love, Carol

John Zoller February 3, 2010 at 5:57 PM Fred - I read each or your 11 poems. This is the best and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 31, 2010 at 6:38 AM Congratulations Fred, You wrote well! Your “Angels” contest entry, sponsored by: “A Rambling Poet” is among the winners! Not only did you do a great job letting your creativity flow with this beautiful love rhyme, but you were you speedy enough to enter (LOL). Keep up the good writing. Your sentiments are very sweet. SMILES… Dane Ann

Corinne Curcio January 30, 2010 at 6:46 PM A sweet loving poem - Congratulations on your win!

January 30, 2010 at 6:11 PM I like the artistic presentation of your poem. Interesting perspective. Congratulations on placing second in the Angel contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire January 30, 2010 at 5:34 PM Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France January 30, 2010 at 5:06 PM Congratulations on your second place win, in my contest Angels, with this beautiful poem.

Carolyn Devonshire January 30, 2010 at 1:38 AM A very original take on the contest, Fred, allowing the "lover" to see his woman as an angel. Women long to be thought of this way. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn