Angels In the Snow

head to head,
brunette and sugar blonde.
snow angels and soul mates.
cheekiness of wings,
as college students
only daydream into the sun kissed room.
the professor taps the glass
displaying a wry smile and a warning.

eye to eye,
blue sky peeks
into moss green, illuminating shadows
from her past. she hushes him with hugs.
he reassures her with a diamond ring
surrounded by tiny emeralds and sapphires.

face to face,
between the crowd and the priest.
wanting to giggle and wriggle
as they remain stoic at the moment.
his wink almost makes her knees faint.

side by side,
white train and polished suit,
enveloped by confetti throwers.
as they reach the threshold of the church,
a professor and his cheeky wife form
angels in the snow.
Their cold cheeks turn red
and true blue.

9/3/2019
John Lawless’ 136 Words poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 8:36 AM
Wonderful poetry Kim. Beautifully written..best wishes for a win in the contest.. Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much, Charles!
Romios Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 4:50 AM
Beautiful. A FAV, hoping you win PR ))
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Thanks so much, sweet poet!
Adams Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 8:01 PM
This is gorgeous great use of metagpr and great story within this one! Wonderful penning :) hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Adams Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 4:25 PM
Very well done! A winner in my book!...pat
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 9:12 PM
Thanks so much, Pat!
Green Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Beautifully crafted Kim. This was just absolutely fantastic. There goes my chances of winning. : )
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 9:13 PM
I doubt it but thanks so much, Chris! :)
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