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Angels In the Rain

I looked out on the gloom of one dark day as rain poured down. Glissandos my ear caught! What joy streamed forth from sweet chords I heard play. The source of them excitedly I sought. My searching eyes at last beheld a sight most marvelous! Amidst loud thundering, two angels strummed on harps! And from their light, flowed hope profound when they began to sing! They sang a song that filled my heart with peace because their lyrics told the story of a time when animosity would cease. Beneath a rainbow then, I felt God's love. June 23, 2018 for Vermillion Scythe's Angels in the Rain Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/3/2018 8:38:00 PM
Your imagination is amazing. Always inspiring. SuZ
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:04:00 PM
What a marvelous composition, on what seems to a rather difficult topic. And the angels without wings, what do they play?
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:01:00 PM
Beauty and inspiration blended so eloquently, Andrea! ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/25/2018 5:42:00 PM
A very uplifting and beautiful poem it is, good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/25/2018 4:43:00 PM
So serene is the feeling here...So happy to read you once-again sweet one xx
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Date: 6/25/2018 1:09:00 PM
Notes streaming like rain drops, wonderful phrasing, lovely write Andrea...
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:09:00 AM
two angels strummed on harps! And from their light, flowed hope profound when they began to sing! Wow. I am not that lucky Andie I wish I could see the angels in rain.Pray for me.Hugs.
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Date: 6/24/2018 8:57:00 PM
A most beautiful and inspiring entry Andrea. Brilliantly written! : )
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Date: 6/24/2018 8:33:00 PM
A very uplifting expressive write Andrea; great imagery! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 7:15:00 PM
Andie, this is a winner from start to finish! Lovely like the angels! Good luck in the contest, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:40:00 PM
Very expressive, creative and descriptive work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for stopping by. I have a whole lot going on in my life right now. I will soup mail you or email you later. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/24/2018 11:06:00 AM
So Andrea, angels like children like to play in the rain.....beautifully written.
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Date: 6/24/2018 4:28:00 AM
Hope keeps dreams alive.... beautiful Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2018 1:14:00 AM
Your last line is heavenly, Andrea. Good luck!
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:15:00 AM
Lovely piece, Andrea, and with a classic feel to it. You Quatrain realy well. Viv x
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Date: 6/23/2018 10:42:00 PM
Andrea.. love the setting, mind picture you give in your "Angels". What were they singing.. I must know to complete the effect?!?!
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:04:00 PM
Beautiful form and imagery, Andrea.
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Date: 6/23/2018 8:50:00 PM
Inspirational sights and sounds in your lovely poem Andrea..best for a win.
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