Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

Angels In the Rain

Rain falls softly in timeless twilight 
shimmering droplets of pure delight
descending upon a moonlit sea 
playing a rapturous melody. 

Heavenly harps strum and caress
angelic songs revive and refresh
transient notes float through the mist
sacred tunes time could never dismiss. 






Written on 6/20/2018

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Edward Orozco February 13, 2019 at 4:10 PM A wonderful write. You are very talented. thank you for sharing! =) Laura Leiser February 13, 2019 at 4:47 PM Thanks for the compliment, Edward. I appreciate it. :)

Mark Peterson August 5, 2018 at 3:37 PM Laura, where on earth is this place? Or is it on the earth at all. I need some time there, but that would be the end of moments for me, as I wandered through timeless twilight, never growing old. What marvelous lines you’ve composed. Don’t stop. Laura Leiser August 5, 2018 at 4:26 PM Thank you, Mark, for your eloquent and encouraging words! I appreciate them very much. I haven’t written poetry lately as my dad recently passed away. Hope to write again soon...

Robert Pettit August 3, 2018 at 1:09 PM It has been raining here in New Jersey on this Friday afternoon. Your words describe the scenery very well. Laura Leiser August 5, 2018 at 4:27 PM So glad these simple words inspired you, Robert. Take care! :)

Connie Marcum Wong July 28, 2018 at 9:48 PM I love poems about the rain Laura. This one is exceptional! Lovely! : ) Laura Leiser July 28, 2018 at 10:21 PM Thanks so much, Connie! I’m happy you enjoyed my poem. :)

Al Juman July 8, 2018 at 10:56 AM Excellent write my dear Laura Leiser July 8, 2018 at 3:48 PM Thank you, Al! You are very encouraging :)

Viv Wigley June 24, 2018 at 12:44 AM Lovely, almost ethereal piece, appropriately. Nicely done, laura. Viv x Laura Leiser June 24, 2018 at 11:08 AM Thank you so much, Viv! I’m glad you liked my simple poem :)

Silent One June 21, 2018 at 5:28 AM Love that last stanza Laura... Those heavenly harps must be something special... Laura Leiser June 22, 2018 at 7:10 PM Thank you, Silent :)