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Angels In the Rain

Rain falls softly in timeless twilight shimmering droplets of pure delight descending upon a moonlit sea playing a rapturous melody. Heavenly harps strum and caress angelic songs revive and refresh transient notes float through the mist sacred tunes time could never dismiss. Written on 6/20/2018

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Date: 2/13/2019 4:10:00 PM
A wonderful write. You are very talented. thank you for sharing! =)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/13/2019 4:47:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment, Edward. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 8/5/2018 3:37:00 PM
Laura, where on earth is this place? Or is it on the earth at all. I need some time there, but that would be the end of moments for me, as I wandered through timeless twilight, never growing old. What marvelous lines you’ve composed. Don’t stop.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/5/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Mark, for your eloquent and encouraging words! I appreciate them very much. I haven’t written poetry lately as my dad recently passed away. Hope to write again soon...
Date: 8/3/2018 1:09:00 PM
It has been raining here in New Jersey on this Friday afternoon. Your words describe the scenery very well.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/5/2018 4:27:00 PM
So glad these simple words inspired you, Robert. Take care! :)
Date: 7/28/2018 9:48:00 PM
I love poems about the rain Laura. This one is exceptional! Lovely! : )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/28/2018 10:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie! I’m happy you enjoyed my poem. :)
Date: 7/8/2018 10:56:00 AM
Excellent write my dear
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/8/2018 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Al! You are very encouraging :)
Date: 6/24/2018 12:44:00 AM
Lovely, almost ethereal piece, appropriately. Nicely done, laura. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/24/2018 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Viv! I’m glad you liked my simple poem :)
Date: 6/21/2018 5:28:00 AM
Love that last stanza Laura... Those heavenly harps must be something special...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2018 7:10:00 PM
Thank you, Silent :)

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