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Angels In the Rain

In wisps from a gentle spirit,
I do my crying in the rain.
Softer grace, I must inherit,
when only angels know my pain.

Harps sacred music beckons thee
as gentle rain bequeaths its will.
From faith and love reveal to me 
an angels heart to shield me still.

Angel In The Rain Contest.
06/13/2018

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Jerry T Curtis Date: 7/19/2018 11:46:00 AM I don't know about the contest Charlie, but this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever heard Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 7/19/2018 12:13:00 PM Thank you Jerry...

Line Gauthier Date: 7/10/2018 10:31:00 PM Beautiful. Congrats on your podium finish, Charlie. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 7/11/2018 9:31:00 AM Thank you Line...

CayCay Jennings Date: 7/7/2018 1:05:00 AM Ahhh - just beautiful, Charlie - ever sweet poem drops of beautiful. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 7/7/2018 12:28:00 PM Thank you CayCay...

Susan Gentry Date: 7/2/2018 6:14:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this tender poem. Well done! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 7/4/2018 10:53:00 AM Thanks Susan...

Lin Lane Date: 7/1/2018 8:38:00 PM Such an elegantly written piece, Charlie. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 7/4/2018 10:46:00 AM Thanks Lin...

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/1/2018 12:45:00 PM So beautifully penned with such a touching, eloquent finish. Congrats on your win in the contest, Charlie! Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 7/4/2018 10:39:00 AM Thank y Gershon...

Vermillion Scythe Date: 7/1/2018 11:00:00 AM Hello, I would like to congratulate you on your bronze placement in my contest! Very nice work you submitted, VS! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 7/1/2018 11:05:00 AM Thank you for sponsoring and your consideration...

Vladislav Raven Date: 6/29/2018 3:24:00 PM Hi Charlie, this is an excellent piece of poetry, so well written my friend. I just want to read this one over and over. You write so beautifully. Your songs belong in the stars. This has to be a fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/30/2018 8:52:00 AM Thank you so much mike...

Probir Gupta Date: 6/25/2018 10:27:00 PM This is indeed beautiful ... The second stanza is splendid ... Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/26/2018 11:45:00 AM Thank you Probir...

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/22/2018 9:30:00 AM One of the best entries I have seen in this contest. Hope it scores very well. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/22/2018 11:32:00 AM Thanks Andrea, you are very kind but mine don't as a rule...

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/21/2018 1:01:00 AM This lovely piece reads like a beautiful prsyer Charlie. I love it! I hope to see it at the top! : ) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/21/2018 10:43:00 AM Thank you dear Connie...

Harry Horsman Date: 6/18/2018 9:30:00 AM Love this Charlie,,and relate very much with it.. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/18/2018 1:14:00 PM Thank you Harry...

Robert Lindley Date: 6/14/2018 3:44:00 PM Exceptional and truly beautiful my friend.. This gem is a fav. This shines ever so brilliantly... Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/14/2018 4:06:00 PM Thank you Robert...

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/13/2018 5:35:00 PM Beautiful poetry..well done, Charlie. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/14/2018 11:03:00 AM Thank you Vijay...

Line Gauthier Date: 6/13/2018 4:23:00 PM Lovely, Charlie. Well penned. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/14/2018 10:57:00 AM Thanks Line...

Heidi Sands Date: 6/13/2018 3:59:00 PM So beautiful and peaceful Charlie! Well done :) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/14/2018 10:54:00 AM Thank you Heidi...

Tim Smith Date: 6/13/2018 3:32:00 PM Beautiful as always Charlie Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 6/14/2018 10:41:00 AM Thanks Tim...