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Angels In the Rain

In wisps from a gentle spirit,
I do my crying in the rain.
Softer grace, I must inherit,
when only angels know my pain.

Harps sacred music beckons thee
as gentle rain bequeaths its will.
From faith and love reveal to me 
an angels heart to shield me still.

Angel In The Rain Contest.
06/13/2018

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Jerry T Curtis July 19, 2018 at 11:46 AM I don't know about the contest Charlie, but this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever heard Charlie Smith July 19, 2018 at 12:13 PM Thank you Jerry...

Line Gauthier July 10, 2018 at 10:31 PM Beautiful. Congrats on your podium finish, Charlie. Charlie Smith July 11, 2018 at 9:31 AM Thank you Line...

CayCay Godwin July 7, 2018 at 1:05 AM Ahhh - just beautiful, Charlie - ever sweet poem drops of beautiful. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Charlie Smith July 7, 2018 at 12:28 PM Thank you CayCay...

Susan Gentry July 2, 2018 at 6:14 PM Congratulations on your win with this tender poem. Well done! Charlie Smith July 4, 2018 at 10:53 AM Thanks Susan...

Lin Lane July 1, 2018 at 8:38 PM Such an elegantly written piece, Charlie. Charlie Smith July 4, 2018 at 10:46 AM Thanks Lin...

Gershon Wolf July 1, 2018 at 12:45 PM So beautifully penned with such a touching, eloquent finish. Congrats on your win in the contest, Charlie! Best wishes, Gershon Charlie Smith July 4, 2018 at 10:39 AM Thank y Gershon...

Vermillion Scythe July 1, 2018 at 11:00 AM Hello, I would like to congratulate you on your bronze placement in my contest! Very nice work you submitted, VS! Charlie Smith July 1, 2018 at 11:05 AM Thank you for sponsoring and your consideration...

Vladislav Raven June 29, 2018 at 3:24 PM Hi Charlie, this is an excellent piece of poetry, so well written my friend. I just want to read this one over and over. You write so beautifully. Your songs belong in the stars. This has to be a fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike. Charlie Smith June 30, 2018 at 8:52 AM Thank you so much mike...

Probir Gupta June 25, 2018 at 10:27 PM This is indeed beautiful ... The second stanza is splendid ... Charlie Smith June 26, 2018 at 11:45 AM Thank you Probir...

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2018 at 9:30 AM One of the best entries I have seen in this contest. Hope it scores very well. Charlie Smith June 22, 2018 at 11:32 AM Thanks Andrea, you are very kind but mine don't as a rule...

Connie Marcum Wong June 21, 2018 at 1:01 AM This lovely piece reads like a beautiful prsyer Charlie. I love it! I hope to see it at the top! : ) Charlie Smith June 21, 2018 at 10:43 AM Thank you dear Connie...

Harry Horsman June 18, 2018 at 9:30 AM Love this Charlie,,and relate very much with it.. Charlie Smith June 18, 2018 at 1:14 PM Thank you Harry...

Robert Lindley June 14, 2018 at 3:44 PM Exceptional and truly beautiful my friend.. This gem is a fav. This shines ever so brilliantly... Charlie Smith June 14, 2018 at 4:06 PM Thank you Robert...

Vijay Pandit June 13, 2018 at 5:35 PM Beautiful poetry..well done, Charlie. Charlie Smith June 14, 2018 at 11:03 AM Thank you Vijay...

Line Gauthier June 13, 2018 at 4:23 PM Lovely, Charlie. Well penned. Charlie Smith June 14, 2018 at 10:57 AM Thanks Line...

Heidi Sands June 13, 2018 at 3:59 PM So beautiful and peaceful Charlie! Well done :) Charlie Smith June 14, 2018 at 10:54 AM Thank you Heidi...

Tim Smith June 13, 2018 at 3:32 PM Beautiful as always Charlie Charlie Smith June 14, 2018 at 10:41 AM Thanks Tim...