Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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02.12.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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Couplet Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Karen Jones

2nd place in the contest

 

- Angels For Your Soul -

                         A winter night where the stars will gleam
                              divinely touched with silver beam

                        Through the floorboards of heaven they sing
                          with sparkling white robe and folded wing

                           Cast fragrance in the dim morning light
                         moving rhythmically in synchronized bright

                          From the kingdom of the heavenly voice
                        the probability of their existence - your choice

                      There is room for a step between man and God
                     Pearlescent wing ornament bends under the sword

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Valsa George December 10, 2024 at 7:24 PM Back to your poem to congratulate you on your well deserved win. I liked the poem as well as the image. Love and hugs, dear Anne !

Karen Jones December 10, 2024 at 12:03 PM Anne-Lise I adored your poem! The imagery was amazing and the word choice so melodic! Congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for entering! Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2024 at 5:52 AM - Thank you very much Karen, a pleasant surprise :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues December 4, 2024 at 5:24 AM A pretty write! I can visualize through your imagery! Hugs :)

Jay Narain December 3, 2024 at 10:41 AM A true divine poem. Loved it.

Andrea Dietrich December 3, 2024 at 9:28 AM this is a beautiful entry in Karen's contest. Well done.

John Read December 3, 2024 at 8:06 AM It gives me a nice feeling knowing a angel is watching over me. Wishing you well in the contest Anne. xx

Duke Beaufort December 3, 2024 at 5:25 AM Anne-Lise, thanks for highlighting the mystery of this universe we're in, and for allowing for individual differences in belief. If everyone could accept this idea, global peace could prevail! Smiles!

Ink Empress December 3, 2024 at 4:22 AM Dear anne lise this is such a soul warming and artistic poem woven with such captivating imagery and sublime rhymes; very well delivered in such a seamless manner. I especially love the opening and also how youv written “ with sparkling white robe and folded wing Cast fragrance in the dim morning light” just stunning and moving! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar December 3, 2024 at 2:17 AM Stars gleam, and angels sing—perfect emotions for the Christmas season. Loved the idea of fragrance.

Valsa George December 2, 2024 at 11:55 PM Your poem has lifted me up high into the heavens. I see angels dancing amid fluffy clouds and singing celestial songs. Lovely couplets and lovely image. All the best dear Anne. Love and hugs.

David Crandall December 2, 2024 at 5:17 PM I'd like to sit on a cloud and let my eyes follow that silver beam through the floorboards of heaven to watch those angels dance and sing! When the time comes, I hope my soul follows. Magical poem!

Frederic Parker December 2, 2024 at 4:41 PM when you write about Angels you write about peace and love, dear poet

Jan Allison December 2, 2024 at 4:39 PM fabulous lines, we definitely need angels watching over us Anne-lise hugs jan xx

Anne E Sangster - K December 2, 2024 at 2:19 PM Anne, your wonderful poem sings with angelic uplifting vibrations. Thank you for writing this. It was a pleasure to read :-) Oh, and I most definately believe in angels. They are our cosmic siblings that have evolved to higher realms of conciousness. Hugs and Smiles to you ~ Anne xox

Tom Cunningham December 2, 2024 at 12:55 PM They say everyone has a guardian angel that watches over us. Well written Anne Lise, good luck in the contest. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2024 at 1:10 PM - We all need an angel or two... with all the conflicts and wars going on in the world today, Tom - Thank you very much :) - hugs