Angels Danced

Thinking of day you were born still brings tears to my eyes. I was in a most unhappy marriage of my own making. Two beautiful girls preceded you, bringing me much joy, but you pulled at my heart strings and glinted in my eye. As you lay on my body once born, you looked up at me and sort of smiled. My little missing puzzle piece.

purest love is born
    in physical form today
        in the shape of you


30/09/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/22/2020 1:48:00 PM
aww jean this brought tears to my eyes its so lovely:-) hugs jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/22/2020 3:21:00 PM
Poetry has that power and that's the joy of releasing emotion. We are so lucky we have a muse. Mine has left me and I am not amused!
Date: 9/22/2020 11:16:00 AM
This is brilliant! Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/22/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 9/17/2020 9:57:00 AM
Your poem is simply breathtaking, Jean. How exquisite this gem is. "My little missing puzzle piece" brings tears to my eyes. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/17/2020 10:13:00 AM
Aw Susan, you are too nice to me. Rena is now 24 years old and could not be farther away. She is in Vancouver and loving it.
Date: 9/16/2020 11:15:00 PM
My little missing puzzle piece... Beautifully done.. Congrats on your great win Jean..
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/17/2020 2:47:00 AM
Thank you Jenish. I'm thrilled.
Date: 9/6/2020 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful. Everything said in so few words. When love is born. Can't be stopped. A wonderful poem dear Jean.
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Date: 9/6/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you John. She could not be further from my body here in Ireland this past year. Alas, Rena is in Vanouver....and loving it!
Date: 8/31/2019 6:55:00 AM
Aww this is beautiful...
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/31/2019 7:06:00 AM
Good afternoon Silent. I cried like a baby writing that one.
Date: 8/30/2019 11:50:00 AM
- Lovely written, Jean :) - Best wishes in the contest - Enjoy your weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2019 2:27:00 PM
Hello Anna-Lise. Big change in the weather here. I am house bound and remembering. Hope all is well with you and yours.
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