Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Free verse

Angels and the Rain

Once upon a time, the angels,

Having witnessed the predicaments of Man, 

So moved were that their fluffy wings together joined 
  
Overcasting the whole sky, and started crying

For

Humanity’s wounds to cleanse wished and 

Alleviate its pain

Since then

Each time a prayer the angels hear, asking them 

The aches of humanity to ease, their tears let fall upon

Earth, as RAIN!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
   27 FEBRUARY 2015


NOTE: (For what it worth) The above story is not a repetition of a story told by someone else but a story I was inspired to create!

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Emile Pinet March 5, 2015 at 3:15 PM You process a poetic soul that breathes magic into your words. Emile. #7 Demetrios Trifiatis March 6, 2015 at 7:37 AM Your comments, always a poetic experience, dear Emile! Thank you!

Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2015 at 7:22 AM After reading your poem, I can think of no better reason to walk in the rain. Demetrios Trifiatis February 28, 2015 at 7:26 AM Such a wonderful comment, my friend, Richard!

David Meade February 27, 2015 at 3:34 PM I now look forward to the rain . . . Whenever showers come, I will remember this poem. 7 Demetrios Trifiatis February 28, 2015 at 6:16 AM ...and I will be thinking of you, thinking about this poem, dear David! Thank you so much for your kindness and generosity!

Eve Roper February 27, 2015 at 3:09 PM Wow!! The imagery you have left in my mind of the angels weeping. Blessings dear friend Demetrios Trifiatis February 27, 2015 at 3:24 PM Thank you dearest, Eve, for your beautiful comment! I appreciate it. God bless you!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2015 at 7:10 AM - Beautiful and touching, dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis February 27, 2015 at 2:39 PM It is wonderful to receive your visit and comment my dear friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs!

Eileen Manassian February 27, 2015 at 3:15 AM Beautiful....cleansing rain of angels...How sweet. Bless you, my dear poet. Demetrios Trifiatis February 27, 2015 at 2:37 PM Eileen, my dearest , thank you for your gracious visit and comment! Bless you too!