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Angels

Earthbound as divine powers on mission Empowered by knowledge, eager to guide Looking after weary and forgotten Guarding the helpless and the teary eyed From distant rice fields to high mountain peaks Holding tides at bay when disaster hits From the Atlantic to the Pacific Message of God's bliss never ever quits Bringing every life blessed gift of love When grief ascends while happiness retreats Riding on gentle breeze of mourning dove A message that lifts from hopeless defeats The Angels will not surrender God's will Tirelessly working to convey goodwill September 7, 2017 abab cdcd efef gg rhyme--10 syllables per line HM: Strand choice 11 contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 7/9/2022 5:53:00 AM
Angels are there all around us to steer our way and guard us from all ills ! They are not seen in celestial form alone but sometimes in human form too. They rally round to wipe away the tears and insulate us from deadly current. An angelic poem , Vijay !
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Date: 9/13/2017 10:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Well done
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/10/2017 12:21:00 PM
Congrats for your placement Vijay, with this wonderful piece! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Teddy!
Date: 9/9/2017 12:32:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 9/9/2017 11:16:00 AM
cool! i like that God's angels do care so much for us; as His love remonstrates. nicely penned; a hope for the weary, the lost and those seeking His guidance. cheers!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thank you for lovely comments, John!
Date: 9/9/2017 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay ! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 9/9/2017 4:18:00 AM
Beautiful message, my friend, and such a lovely, rhythmic composition ... I enjoyed it very much! Blessings to you, and congrats on your win, Vijay! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Greg and congrats on your big win!
Date: 9/8/2017 11:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay ... Thanks for your Congratulations on my success too ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2017 11:20:00 PM
Thanks Probir!
Date: 9/8/2017 3:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Curtis!
Date: 9/8/2017 2:54:00 PM
Hi Vijay, a wonderful poem of blissful delights. Congratulations on you win! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Susan for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/8/2017 12:59:00 PM
Back to Congrats!!! my friend...yahoo!!!...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thanks WW..congrats on your win as well!
Date: 9/7/2017 8:09:00 PM
Powerful write ... A nice sonnet ... Thank you for liking my story of Angels ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 8:40:00 PM
Thanks Probir!
Date: 9/7/2017 5:26:00 PM
Nicely done, Vijay, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 9/7/2017 4:05:00 PM
i am enlightened by this glorious poem, being an angel patron.... so lovely, vijay..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 4:13:00 PM
Delighted by your lovely comments, nette!
Date: 9/7/2017 8:56:00 AM
What a beautiful and inspiring poem. Excellent Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your lovely feedback! I am always so happy to read your comments!
Date: 9/7/2017 8:36:00 AM
Angelic-ly done my friend...a heaven sent verse...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thank you WW for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/7/2017 7:13:00 AM
Esoteric inspirational writing my friend, Vijay! May you be forever under their protective wings! Glorious!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 7:43:00 AM
Such lovely uplifting comments from you would make anyone's day full of joy--thank you so much Demetrios!
Date: 9/7/2017 6:29:00 AM
I really enjoyed this write on angels, Vijay! GL in contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 7:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading comments Kim--thank you so much!

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