Angelita.

Tonight, the wind will whisper,
the trees will sigh,
but this lamp i have lit for you,
will never be doused.

Tonight, the stars will gaze,
the rivers will murmur,
and the moon will come out of her hiding,
but this lamp i have lit for you,
will never be extinguished.

Tonight, in this fiery blue darkness,
my eyes await you.
my ears ache for your footfalls.

Tonight, in this very lamp i have lit for you,
i burn.
i burn.
i burn in every pore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Badmus Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 5:12 AM
yeah, everything else cease to exist when waiting for love.it's appearance induces another ache for more and re-ignites the fire but it's failure to respond will result in the desire burning into ashes.sweet and romantic
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December 23, 2009 at 1:20 AM
Personification!!! Well done kk, Well written.
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December 22, 2009 at 3:19 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals KK. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:11 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, KK! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 9, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week, Rgds Janette
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December 9, 2009 at 2:46 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week K K. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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December 7, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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December 7, 2009 at 12:13 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
Mason Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Beautiful writing here K K ... congratulations on having your work featured this week at the Soup!
Chircop Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 10:54 PM
romantic,passionate and deep,we take long to hear a poem of yours but then its always extraordinary beautful,and thanks my friend you and frank anatacio where the first two poets to support me here at the beggining,thanks!--charma
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May 23, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Beautifully romantic, K K. I hope the love you describe continues to "burn in every pore." Love, Carolyn
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