Angelina

In between the hill and mountain
Flows down so lovely a river
Gurgling giggling rippling fountain
Apples greet you go wherever

Flows down so lovely a river
She is little Angelina
Apples greet you go wherever
The mountains are Mark and Jena

She is little Angelina
Studies in the picturesque school
The mountains are Mark and Jena
Mark a plumber Jena weaves wool

Studies in the picturesque school
Her friends are Tom Eve and Nina 
Mark a plumber Jena weaves wool
Near a lake in Argentina

Her friends are Tom Eve and Nina
Their common friends are sun and rain
Near a lake in Argentina
With larks and lilies make quatrain

Their common friends are sun and rain
Gurgling giggling rippling fountain
With larks and lilies make quatrain
In between the hill and mountain
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29/9/2016
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 3:03 AM
A lovely pantoum, Probir. That is some fancy flowing writing. Gotta give it up to you, that is a form I've yet to try. You do it so well. Wonderful poem. I just love your work, sir. Much love to you. RW
Gupta Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Thank you ....
Roper Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 6:09 AM
Thank you so much ...
Y. Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Thank you, Alexis ...
White Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:49 AM
I simply adore this line: "Gurgling giggling rippling fountain". Congratulations!
Gupta Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:39 AM
Thank you ... adoring is pleasure-deriving ...
Y. Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Hi Probir, What a beauty. This a well written Pantoum. I wish the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Thank you Alexis ...
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Indeed "natural". Nice.
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Thank you ...
Smith Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Sun and rain are good friends to have. Wonderful Probir
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Recreating nature's wonder with captivating expressions so fine dear, Probir!
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Thank you ...
Kannan Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 5:38 AM
This is beautiful....Nicely penned...A big 7...
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:26 AM
I really like this one Probir, are they family members?
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 3:23 AM
Thank you ... In case it is not clear from the poem who they are then that is a shortcoming the poem suffers from ....
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