Angelina

In between the hill and mountain
Flows down so lovely a river
Gurgling giggling rippling fountain
Apples greet you go wherever

Flows down so lovely a river
She is little Angelina
Apples greet you go wherever
The mountains are Mark and Jena

She is little Angelina
Studies in the picturesque school
The mountains are Mark and Jena
Mark a plumber Jena weaves wool

Studies in the picturesque school
Her friends are Tom Eve and Nina 
Mark a plumber Jena weaves wool
Near a lake in Argentina

Her friends are Tom Eve and Nina
Their common friends are sun and rain
Near a lake in Argentina
With larks and lilies make quatrain

Their common friends are sun and rain
Gurgling giggling rippling fountain
With larks and lilies make quatrain
In between the hill and mountain
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29/9/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 10/23/2016 3:03:00 AM
A lovely pantoum, Probir. That is some fancy flowing writing. Gotta give it up to you, that is a form I've yet to try. You do it so well. Wonderful poem. I just love your work, sir. Much love to you. RW
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Date: 10/23/2016 9:25:00 PM
Thank you ....
Date: 10/17/2016 8:31:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/18/2016 6:09:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 10/17/2016 11:39:00 AM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/18/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis ...
Date: 10/17/2016 12:49:00 AM
I simply adore this line: "Gurgling giggling rippling fountain". Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/17/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thank you ... adoring is pleasure-deriving ...
Date: 9/29/2016 2:33:00 PM
Hi Probir, What a beauty. This a well written Pantoum. I wish the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2016 10:51:00 PM
Thank you Alexis ...
Date: 9/29/2016 10:06:00 AM
Indeed "natural". Nice.
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:52:00 PM
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:44:00 AM
Sun and rain are good friends to have. Wonderful Probir
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/29/2016 7:36:00 AM
Recreating nature's wonder with captivating expressions so fine dear, Probir!
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Date: 9/29/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/29/2016 5:38:00 AM
This is beautiful....Nicely penned...A big 7...
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Date: 9/29/2016 7:40:00 AM
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Date: 9/29/2016 2:26:00 AM
I really like this one Probir, are they family members?
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Date: 9/29/2016 3:23:00 AM
Thank you ... In case it is not clear from the poem who they are then that is a shortcoming the poem suffers from ....
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