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Angelina

In between the hill and mountain Flows down so lovely a river Gurgling giggling rippling fountain Apples greet you go wherever Flows down so lovely a river She is little Angelina Apples greet you go wherever The mountains are Mark and Jena She is little Angelina Studies in the picturesque school The mountains are Mark and Jena Mark a plumber Jena weaves wool Studies in the picturesque school Her friends are Tom Eve and Nina Mark a plumber Jena weaves wool Near a lake in Argentina Her friends are Tom Eve and Nina Their common friends are sun and rain Near a lake in Argentina With larks and lilies make quatrain Their common friends are sun and rain Gurgling giggling rippling fountain With larks and lilies make quatrain In between the hill and mountain ____________________________________________ 29/9/2016

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Date: 10/23/2016 3:03:00 AM
A lovely pantoum, Probir. That is some fancy flowing writing. Gotta give it up to you, that is a form I've yet to try. You do it so well. Wonderful poem. I just love your work, sir. Much love to you. RW
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2016 9:25:00 PM
Thank you ....
Date: 10/17/2016 8:31:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/18/2016 6:09:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 10/17/2016 11:39:00 AM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/18/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis ...
Date: 10/17/2016 12:49:00 AM
I simply adore this line: "Gurgling giggling rippling fountain". Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/17/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thank you ... adoring is pleasure-deriving ...
Date: 9/29/2016 2:33:00 PM
Hi Probir, What a beauty. This a well written Pantoum. I wish the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2016 10:51:00 PM
Thank you Alexis ...
Date: 9/29/2016 10:06:00 AM
Indeed "natural". Nice.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2016 10:52:00 PM
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:44:00 AM
Sun and rain are good friends to have. Wonderful Probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/29/2016 7:36:00 AM
Recreating nature's wonder with captivating expressions so fine dear, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/29/2016 5:38:00 AM
This is beautiful....Nicely penned...A big 7...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2016 7:40:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/29/2016 2:26:00 AM
I really like this one Probir, are they family members?
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/29/2016 3:23:00 AM
Thank you ... In case it is not clear from the poem who they are then that is a shortcoming the poem suffers from ....

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