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Angelic Tendrils

Angelic Tendrils by Darren White and Jason Williams (bothboos) Angelic tendrils cascade over his twinkling eyes His lightning green reflect my amazement He catches my gaze and mimics my wonder Twinkling resonating in my inner being Angelic tendrils dancing with his laughter Tight curls, like ribbons on a gift just for me The sharpness of his eyes and the curve of his smile Such a divine combination, a gift that heaven sent In me he lives, and I in him, far more than just friends And then I lift him in my arms and carry him away To a place that is safe, to a place that is warm And with the soft brushing of lips an eternal love has begun. His eyes read the thousand words he could not say My very self in loving thoughts I need not explain It brings me to where pain has no place Where our hearts can beat their beat together

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/31/2016 12:29:00 AM
Well guys, I am going to ante up a 7 here - this poem glows with truth (and makes many hearts glad as they read). You both shot an arrow at the moon, the arrows joined into one, and the moon caught it, gladder than ever before. The moon smiles upon you.
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Date: 12/30/2016 12:58:00 PM
I love this poem so very much! You guys write amazing poetry together! loved it - love both of you <3
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Date: 11/20/2016 6:56:00 AM
You need to add the audio to the poem it is incredible you have a wonderful voice Jason:-):-):-) Darren you need to post this on your page with the audio!!!!!! hugs jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 11/23/2016 2:45:00 AM
Yeah, I'm adding audio to the poems as we speak :) Thanks Jan!
Date: 11/16/2016 7:10:00 PM
Boo X 2 welcome to soup :-) I adore your romantic collaboration and look forward to reading many many more:-) Especially love the line about the curls :-) hugs jan XX
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Boo X2
Date: 11/17/2016 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Jan, from one of the two boos, the other one is sleeping, different continent!
Date: 11/16/2016 1:18:00 PM
A terrific collab Boo X2...it is seamless
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Boo X2
Date: 11/16/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Tim! Greetings from the Darren White part of us :)
Date: 11/16/2016 12:59:00 PM
That is wonderful Boo2 :) ... YAY us \o/
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Boo X2
Date: 11/16/2016 1:01:00 PM
Our first poem together! Yay! :~)

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