Nette Onclaud Poet Ottava rima

Angelic Light

I enter an arch of disarranged hill
Blinded by darkness; thick the skin of air.
My lips quiver into whispers, until
Feathers so lucent appear from nowhere.
Sweet voice of cherub awakens a thrill
Listening to her psalm of light, sincere.
While fragrance of comfort wafts on flowered breast
Angel of dove wheels far, granting me rest.



Angels Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

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Poet Destroyer A January 6, 2016 at 12:40 AM Nette, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Skat A January 3, 2016 at 11:25 PM Nette, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**

Beautiful Scars January 2, 2016 at 3:53 PM Nette..congrats! I really enjoyed this poem today!! Congrats *smiles* -luloo

Jean Mcloughlin January 2, 2016 at 2:06 PM I love your poem Nette! Sending you congrats on doves wings!! Jean

Joyce Johnson January 2, 2016 at 1:30 PM This is simply beautiful, Nette. Congratulations. Love, joyce

Hansteven Selfa January 2, 2016 at 5:37 AM Congratulations on your very well-deserved win!

Balveen Cheema January 1, 2016 at 11:36 PM Nette, you are an amzing poet! A 7! Congrats on you placement!

Michael Tor January 1, 2016 at 9:51 PM Nette congratulations on your win!!

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2014 at 5:30 PM A beautiful poem, and win... Nette... PD

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2014 at 12:01 PM Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Donna Jones March 26, 2014 at 6:46 PM Absolutely a stunning piece nett..congratulations on top win

D.W. Rodgers March 26, 2014 at 4:15 PM Dovely - congrats on your win

Joseph May March 26, 2014 at 3:18 PM Beautiful write...congrats on your win

Paul Callus March 25, 2014 at 3:58 PM Artfully written. congrats on win. // paul

Verlena S. Walker March 25, 2014 at 3:13 PM Congratulations on your win Nette... Verlena

Mustapha Mohammed February 16, 2014 at 7:11 AM Profound Nette! That's all I can say for now.

Tim B February 14, 2014 at 5:16 PM A beautiful poem. I love the line 'I clutch for the moon that guides a wind's flow;" Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem Miss Nette.

Shadow Hamilton February 14, 2014 at 8:56 AM you have wowed me with this Nette it is exceptional hugs

Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2014 at 8:03 AM What a wonderful way to start my day, breathtakingly beautiful.

Donna Jones February 14, 2014 at 7:10 AM Oh nette..I felt as though I was visiting my loved ones on a cold fall evening...with a blessed visit...my........angelic....

Tim Ryerson February 14, 2014 at 6:00 AM Well my friend, this made MY lips quiver! Why you wanna do that to this old man? 'Psalm of light'...Yes indeed - Tim

Marvin G. Celestial February 14, 2014 at 2:52 AM Fantastic one Nette!

Russell Sivey February 13, 2014 at 10:46 PM the art of rest, so brilliant and conditioned for joy of the moment, I love this write about this angel of delight! I really enjoyed reading this powerful poem this evening! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!

Kayod5 Kayode February 13, 2014 at 2:09 PM A great one nette,I don't expect less.Great always,thanks to the voice of the cherub...

Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2014 at 1:37 PM - Really a winning poem, Nette !!! - Luck - Luck - Luck !!! - Breathtaking!! - Have a romantic <3 - day!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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