Angelic Harp In the Rain

angels cannot interfere with injustices 
they witness in the mortal realm
their tears we know as drops of rain
may one day drown all and dishelm 

angels in show of compassion
do play the harp and throw a rope
hoping those who quieten their heart
will hear their notes of love and hope



AP: 3rd place 2021

Submitted on July 23, 2018 for contest FAVORITE POEM WRITTEN IN JUNE 2018 sponsored by DEAR HEART AKA BROKEN WINGS  -  RANKED 2ND
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Gentry Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. Very lovely!
Gauthier Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.
La France Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great poem, well done !
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much. I was thrilled with my ranking. Most appreciated.
Messina Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Wonderful, Line. a beautiful angelic write my friend...Congrats! Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Thank you, Charles. Most appreciated.
Fisher Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Congratulations! I really liked the idea of throwing a rope and hearing notes of hope.
Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Thanks, Haley, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Canerdy Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Very lovely. CONGRATS, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.
Haight Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Such lovely angelic imagery in your poem that brings a peaceful feeling to the heart, Line. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 9:17 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Fisher Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 9:46 AM
A beautiful poem. I especially liked the last few lines.
Gauthier Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Thank you so much, Haley. Most appreciated.
Canerdy Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:05 PM
Very descriptive and moving, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. Most appreciated.
Smith Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Great entry Line, best wishes...
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie. Most appreciated.
Donnelly Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:06 AM
Wow, Line, another gem I love. Love angels and I love the last two lines especially. In the contest, all the best, and always, God bless. :) ~ Artsie
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Thank you so much, Artsieladie. You've been away, we missed you!
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