Angelic Angels

I live in a world of angelic angels transmitting happiness
They enclasp me in their arms to cheer me when I am fretten
Laughter channel at anything ridiculous in resounding togetherness
Sharing and giving a helping hand to carry each cumbersome burden
We pour out our sorrows, sermonise and laugh it off with perfect acumen


Rhyming scheme ababb
January 2, 2015
Contest: Angels
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 6, 2016 at 12:42 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
Cheema Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 12:38 AM
Thanks Linda!
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January 3, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
Cheema Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:11 AM
Thanks Skat!
Scars Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Just beautiful Balveen..congrats on your well deserved win! *smiles* -luloo
Cheema Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 4:42 PM
It's about my group of friends in my institute. We're pretty crazy, but a loving lot. Love...
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Beautiful poem Balveen, congratulations on your win. From Jean
Cheema Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 2:16 PM
Happy New Year Jean and thanks both for your visit and appreciation! Love....
Johnson Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:33 PM
You seem to have some loving folks surrounding you. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Cheema Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:37 PM
By the grace of God I do. For me relationships are primal. Thanks for your visit and appreciation Joyce! Love flows...
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 6:31 AM
Nicely written, Balveen. Your have wonderful angels in your world. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 8:12 AM
That's my world in my institution. We meet and depart with an embrace. We hate taking leaves as every moment is angelic and we are three score who have worked to create it who are always in a celebratory mood. Love Sandra
Selfa Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on your very well-deserved win!
Cheema Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Hanstevan!
Negron Flores Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Balveen.
Cheema Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Thanks Nayda! That was real quick! Love...
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