Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Poetry/Rhyme/Angelic
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1629-522-13
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 13, 2024
For the International Contest, Appreciation, Anger, Air, Angelic
Sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 03/28/2024

Third Place

Angelic

 
Inspiration, Title 4, Angelic and quotation.

"And so it is, that both the Devil and the angelic Spirit present us
with objects of desire to awaken our power of choice. There is an 
invisible strength within us; when it recognizes two opposing objects
of desire, it grows stronger."

                                                          Quote by _ Rumi  



                            I am always dreamer,
                transcending realms of time and space;
and within mind an angel will shimmer,
a benevolent being with no face.

                           I hear a voice talking,
an angelic being is truth speaking;
sent to protect me from evil seeking.

Evil has one goal to turn me from good,
                Lucifer ... whispers his falsehood;
                         but, I have personhood.

And with courage ~ strength his words grow dimmer,
temptations of greed and hate with no base;
                  he is ever trying ~ creeping,
                        angels guide me to good.

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Paula Goldsmith March 28, 2024 at 9:43 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Angelic" write. What a pretty angel picture. Love your line, "Lucifer ... whispers his falsehood." So Very True. In life we need to watch out.... Have a blessed day............. Constance La France March 28, 2024 at 12:58 PM Paula, thank you for the congratulations, compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance

Valsa George March 17, 2024 at 10:43 PM If we have such an angel residing within, our attitudes to life will change. Angels are there to guide us and illumine our paths. You have done full justice to Rumi's quote. Love this poem of mixed rhyming. All the Best dear Constance. Constance La France March 18, 2024 at 6:49 PM Valsa, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, hugs, Constance

Ink Empress March 15, 2024 at 1:15 AM What a deep and profound write this is Dear Constance. I absolutely love the way this flows and how you’ve delivered this: gives an introspective and very sincere touch to your poetic voice. I especially love “ temptations of greed and hate with no base; he is ever trying ~ creeping,” excellent! Soulful! Pleasure reading . Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always Constance La France March 17, 2024 at 7:32 PM Ink, thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment and encouragement, hugs, Constance

Victor Buhagiar March 14, 2024 at 9:28 AM We all have angels to protect us. Lovely poem. Constance La France March 14, 2024 at 3:28 PM Victor, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance

Unseeking Seeker March 13, 2024 at 8:55 PM Perfect write keeping Rumi’s quote in view! Beautiful poem Constance La France March 14, 2024 at 3:28 PM Seeker, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance

Abdullah Alhemaidy March 13, 2024 at 4:58 PM Lovely, pithy and sweet read! Have a very nice time ~ AA Constance La France March 14, 2024 at 3:29 PM AA, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance