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Poetry/Rhyme/Angelic
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1629-522-13
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 13, 2024
For the International Contest, Appreciation, Anger, Air, Angelic
Sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 03/28/2024

Third Place

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Inspiration, Title 4, Angelic and quotation. "And so it is, that both the Devil and the angelic Spirit present us with objects of desire to awaken our power of choice. There is an invisible strength within us; when it recognizes two opposing objects of desire, it grows stronger." Quote by _ Rumi I am always dreamer, transcending realms of time and space; and within mind an angel will shimmer, a benevolent being with no face. I hear a voice talking, an angelic being is truth speaking; sent to protect me from evil seeking. Evil has one goal to turn me from good, Lucifer ... whispers his falsehood; but, I have personhood. And with courage ~ strength his words grow dimmer, temptations of greed and hate with no base; he is ever trying ~ creeping, angels guide me to good.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/28/2024 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Angelic" write. What a pretty angel picture. Love your line, "Lucifer ... whispers his falsehood." So Very True. In life we need to watch out.... Have a blessed day.............

Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2024 12:58:00 PM

Paula, thank you for the congratulations, compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance

Valsa George

Date: 3/17/2024 10:43:00 PM

If we have such an angel residing within, our attitudes to life will change. Angels are there to guide us and illumine our paths. You have done full justice to Rumi's quote. Love this poem of mixed rhyming. All the Best dear Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2024 6:49:00 PM

Valsa, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, hugs, Constance

Ink Empress

Date: 3/15/2024 1:15:00 AM

What a deep and profound write this is Dear Constance. I absolutely love the way this flows and how you’ve delivered this: gives an introspective and very sincere touch to your poetic voice. I especially love “ temptations of greed and hate with no base; he is ever trying ~ creeping,” excellent! Soulful! Pleasure reading . Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always

Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2024 7:32:00 PM

Ink, thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment and encouragement, hugs, Constance

Jay Narain

Date: 3/14/2024 10:53:00 AM

Nice poem. Angels protect and guide us.

Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2024 3:27:00 PM

Jay, thank you for the comment and compliment, hugs, Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2024 9:28:00 AM

We all have angels to protect us. Lovely poem.

Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2024 3:28:00 PM

Victor, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/13/2024 8:55:00 PM

Perfect write keeping Rumi’s quote in view! Beautiful poem

Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2024 3:28:00 PM

Seeker, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/13/2024 5:02:00 PM

Fabulous, dear Constance! You nailed the 'prompt' exquisitely. I enjoyed how you beautifully intertwined the angelic with Lucifer who whispers his falsehoods. I agree, 'he is ever trying--creeping, angels guide me to good.' Such strength in those words. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2024 3:29:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment and wonderful comment, and encouragement, hugs, Constance

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 3/13/2024 4:58:00 PM

Lovely, pithy and sweet read! Have a very nice time ~ AA

Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2024 3:29:00 PM

AA, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance