Angel Visits - 2-

Angel Visits (2)

(1)

Rosebud pink dancers endome apricot flushed sky,
Arc'd feathering wingtips exult cirrus high,
Love's pleasured shades delight this thank full eye.

Fright held burden, released in healing long,
Freed heart sings anew, childhood's lost song.

Fierce joy streamers swirl, angels light this temple day.
Blossom hued fliers frolic in gladdest play,
Applaud a soul bravely facing acts hard to say.


(2)

We roast beneath violent radiation storm,

                  then above, though between,

draped arms outstretched, elegant graceful form

                 can be seen!

Sun's power becomes pastel rainbow streams,

                 clouds are called

Iridescent halo's, charge electric blue beams

                 we stand entralled

Our savior solar sylph!



Written 15 August 2018
For Emile Pinet Contest;  New Rhyming poem on Angels.

Both true instances. However, the last image was captured on film.  It has been enlarged and forms a focal point in main home area - reminding me of how close our other dimensional help always is.  Now uploaded as my avatar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/21/2018 4:59:00 PM
Such lovely imagery you present to share your Angel visits, Virginia! Very inspiring! Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/21/2018 5:18:00 PM
thanks Sandra - wanted to give hope and inspire too.
Date: 8/18/2018 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Inspirational and beautiful! Amazing events of faith.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/19/2018 2:52:00 AM
Thanks Susan - even more amazing in reality - words really cannot capture these moments fully. My avatar now is the image of the 2nd verse.
Date: 8/18/2018 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Virginia. This is a beautiful missive, and a tribute felt in heaven, I am sure.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/19/2018 2:49:00 AM
For sure - gratitude is one of the three ascension attitudes - incredibly powerful. Unlocks so many miracles.
Date: 8/17/2018 4:51:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Virginia. Well done.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/19/2018 2:48:00 AM
thanks Line
Date: 8/17/2018 9:40:00 AM
Such ethereal visions, Virginia, thank you for sharing. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 8/19/2018 2:48:00 AM
thanks John - I feel we all can share more - to counteract the gloomy media mutterings.
Date: 8/15/2018 5:11:00 PM
So ethereal, so cosmic, Virginia! A wonderful entry for the contest! :) gw
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/16/2018 8:24:00 PM
All real but subject really wanted free verse - so think will eventually rewrite. Didn't place in contest - so should have just gone with first version.
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