Angel of Love's Embrace

The angel of my death I chanced to see
while visiting a deep and dusky dream.
And not a reaper grim and dark was she,
but rather, at the tunnel’s end, a gleam!

For in the distance glowed her beam of light
that I could tell was well within my reach.
The nuances that flickered in my sight
I knew instinctively to be her speech.

Each twinkle spoke directly to my heart
and urged me to press on through shadows’ way.
Then finally was loosed my fear to part
from earthly realm where I’d been wont to stay.

And when I touched her light; beheld her face,
surrounding me came utter love’s embrace.



For Brian Strand's ANYWHICHWAY any theme/form
 max of 15 lines Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/11/2020 9:35:00 AM
What do you know, you got a first place with Brian with a sonnet (albeit 11 years ago... I'm slightly jealous, haha!) Seriously, this is an extraordinary poem of facing the end of life with confidence and peace, something we need more of during these current dark days. A fave for me.
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Date: 7/29/2014 6:05:00 PM
What a beautiful dream, Andrea, You brought the reader along so well with this lovely sonnet, with rhymes and meter that floated on the wings of angels. Very, very nice, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 11/9/2011 1:16:00 AM
Go to the light is what they say, when time has come to go away, cast off your body cast and then, slip through the veil rejoin your friends... someday...
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:50:00 AM
Very nice Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/7/2011 7:07:00 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea! Love all of it, especially the ending! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations to you for your win in Brian's "Any Which Way" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:24:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on a fantastic first place win with this momentous poetry my friend.. luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:21:00 AM
Yes'at the'life's end we should embrace that lovely angel fearlessly. A beautiful Sonnet from u Andrea.-Kash
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Angels Among Us". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 2:41:00 AM
Very comforting write. Congrats on your win. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 7/10/2010 6:36:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your big win in the Angels Among US contest with this beautiful write .. another great victory dance for u.. I am HOME.. Ron sleeping here this weekend.. omg..so much to tell.. with luv..
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Date: 7/10/2010 1:28:00 AM
Amazing experience. Congrats on your win. I feel I saw the same thing, like I was there with you.
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Date: 7/9/2010 6:37:00 PM
Magic 5 for you Andrea ^_~!!! Super congrats with this one--loved this sonnet of yours--will check out the other winners as well ;) --nikko :)
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:16:00 PM
This is very pretty.
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Date: 7/3/2010 1:59:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet Andrea and such a lovely thought that, at life's end, your angel could be so comforting. I love your sonnets :) ~ Sharon
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:26:00 AM
Constance gonna love this beauty,dear Andrea,lovely!
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:49:00 AM
yes i. am here lol,,slept good today. by the way a nice and wonderful poem. good luck in her contest..he he he ,,,i only say that because you once ended a comment like that,,,lol,..p.d..
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:01:00 PM
Much warmth in your words, Andrea. Good luck in the contest! :) -Grace
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:39:00 PM
They say the death tunnel is filled with light. Did you really have the experience? Many have, or so I hear. In my particular experience, the area, or space, was filled with music and color - no angel. Great experience. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:00:00 PM
loves embrace, thats beautiful((: ~Always
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Date: 7/2/2010 12:55:00 PM
thats different, i've never really heard an angel controlling ones death..sure,ive heard saving one from death, but not so much of this.so this is interesting.(: i thought it was called an angel of life, since they determine the day your life will end natuarlly.and then i thought an angel of death was when they save a person from dieng. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:02:00 AM
See I got it right when I labeled u the QUEEN of the Sonnet in your tribute poem as this one is brilliant and a definite winner ..just the kind A Rambling Poet likes to read... u have outdone yourself with the flow and theme of the Angel .. good luck my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. u MUST get one of these internet phones.. what a piece of technology magic... its my new toy ..after Ron of course..haha..
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Date: 7/2/2010 7:15:00 AM
A nice Shakespearean sonnet, dearest friend on the soup
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Date: 7/2/2010 6:24:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Andrea. The scenario you describe is what I hope to find as well upon passage from one life to the next. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2010 4:03:00 AM
Excellent Sonnet about your angel..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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