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Angel In Your Eyes

When i was young, i could see  in Tads eyes smiling at me An Angel, with a dimpled face Never naughty never in disgrace Older now, how i have grown In different eyes I am shown As an angel who is loved anew. Me in love, hmm is that true? Tads angel not so angelic now All grown up and missing you so Dimpled face, tears sometimes on show Still an Angel in Tads eyes i know Penned 17 October 2013 by Seren Roberts

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Date: 10/21/2013 12:01:00 AM
I agree with Ram, well done!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:28:00 AM
Thank u my friend
Date: 10/19/2013 8:29:00 AM
This is so sweet Seren, I'm glad I stopped by.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:28:00 AM
Thx Richard ...Seren
Date: 10/17/2013 6:33:00 AM
A lovely and tender poem. Loved it.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
hi thanks Monterey ...Seren
Date: 10/17/2013 12:39:00 AM
This is a very inspirational and heartfelt write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a dynamic piece, quite the outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
Hi Russell many thanks ...Seren
Date: 10/16/2013 9:03:00 PM
Very emotional and sentimental write, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
Hello Ram thanks so much ...Seren

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